Black Poetry : Would I be wrong

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  1. erotica223

    erotica223 Member MEMBER

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    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted you to be my man
    To get down on one knee
    And put a rock on my left hand

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted to be your wife
    To have and to hold
    For the rest of your life

    Would I be wrong
    If I pictured our wedding
    From the dress to the tux
    To the gifts we would be getting

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted us to make a family
    And to be set for life
    With everything we needed to live happily

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted to have your kids
    And when they got older
    I’d tell them about all the crazy things we once did

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted you to meet my friends and family
    So I could introduce them to the one
    That I wanted to spend the rest of my life with me

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted our relationship to last
    And hoped it would be different
    From the ones in my past

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted all those other girls out of your life
    Cuz I wanted to be your one and only
    And I was trying to be your wife

    Would I be wrong
    If sometimes I got a little envious
    When I saw you talking to another girl
    Even if she was just your associate


    Would I be wrong
    If I told you never to cheat
    And that as long as I was your girl
    You’d have everything you need

    Would I be wrong
    If I didn’t believe the rumors were true
    Because I didn’t believe anything
    Unless I heard it directly from you

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted us never to fight
    And to always talk
    If we felt that something wasn’t right

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted to hold it down for you
    And have your back for life
    Like a real ride or die chick would do

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted us to stick together
    Cuz then only God could hold us down
    And our love would last forever

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted you to spend more time with me than with your friends
    Cuz I was selfish when it came to you
    And I thought our time together was more important

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted us have a love so strong
    A love so deep
    A love that lasted us our whole lives long

    Would I be wrong
    If I didn’t like to be alone
    And sometimes made you stay up all night
    Talking to me on the phone

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted you to stand by me
    To always stick up for me
    And never deny me


    Would I be wrong
    If I didn’t want you to use me
    Or do anything
    To physically or emotionally abuse me

    Would I be wrong
    If I never wanted you to neglect me
    If I wanted you to always care for me
    And always respect me

    Would I be wrong
    If I told you to never judge me
    And no matter what happens
    To always love me

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted you to keep the promises you make
    Cuz if you ever broke one
    I knew my heart would break

    Would I be wrong
    If I didn’t want you to break my heart
    Cuz I knew that if you did
    My whole world would fall apart

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted you to protect me from harm
    And when I’m hurting
    To wrap me in your arms

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted you to just hold me in you arms
    Because when you’re holding me
    My problems don’t seem to exist anymore

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted you to be understanding
    And to try deal with me
    Even when I’m stubborn and demanding

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted you to be romantic
    And not go off on me
    When you can’t deal with my antics



    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted us to have intelligent conversations
    And to talk about things
    That gave us mental stimulation

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted you to forgive and forget
    About all the times when I ****** up
    And just let go of all that ****

    Would I be wrong
    If wanted you to always be real
    And never be afraid
    To tell me how you feel

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted you to open up to me
    And tell me all of your burdens
    So you can finally be set free

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted to just stare deep into your eyes
    And try to find the real you
    Revealed and undisguised

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted not only your heart
    But your mind, body, and soul
    Right from the start

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted to tell you my dreams
    From the things that I want in life
    To the kind of person that I want to be

    Would I be wrong
    If I said it was love at first sight
    And that I fell for you
    Within a couple of nights

    Would I be wrong
    If I fell in love all over again every time I heard your voice
    And when I thought about how much I loved you
    My heart glowed and my eyes got moist


    Would I be wrong
    If I thought we were meant to be
    That I was the one for you
    And you were the one for me

    Would I be wrong
    If I called you my heart
    Because I loved you with a passion
    And never wanted us to be apart

    Would I be wrong
    If my love for you was pure
    And it was like a disease
    Without a cure

    Would I be wrong
    If I said that I loved you
    That you were my baby
    And I placed no one above you

    Would I be wrong
    If I was willing to do anything for you
    And you could never accuse me
    of not being true

    Would I be wrong
    If I was willing to walk a thousand miles
    Just to see your face
    Just to see your smile

    Would I be wrong
    If I didn’t call you my number one
    Cuz that would mean I had a number 2&3…
    If I called you my only one cuz you’re the only one for me

    Would I be wrong
    If I didn’t let my friends put you down
    Cuz they just don’t seem to realize
    That you’ll always be around

    Would I be wrong
    If I couldn’t concentrate from time to time
    And sometimes went into a daze
    Cuz you were on my mind



    Would I be wrong
    If I called you my prince
    Cuz you swept me off my feet
    And I’ve been living happily ever after ever since

    Would I be wrong
    If I treated you like a king
    Catered to your needs and wants
    And gave you everything

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted you to treat me like a queen
    To spoil me royally
    And in the bed get on your knees

    Would I be wrong
    If I got weak from your touch
    And your kisses made my heartbeat quicken
    Because I loved you so much

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted you to take my virginity
    And I wanted you to be
    The only boy that was ever inside of me

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted us to play fight in bed
    And even go down on you
    Cuz I wasn’t afraid to give my baby some head

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted to turn you out
    And If I wanted to teach you
    What I thought sex was all about

    Would I be wrong
    If I just wanted you to just be with me
    To be my man
    And promise me you’ll never leave

    Would I be wrong
    If I wanted everything to be ok
    For us to be together happily
    Or peacefully go our separate ways



    Would I be wrong
    If I said I will love you forever
    Whether we’re near or far apart
    Even if we’re not together

    Would I be wrong
    If I said you’re a special part of me
    And I think if we just give it time
    You’ll see we’re meant to be

    Would I be wrong
    If I said no girl will ever love you as much as I do
    And that any girl that isn’t me
    Isn’t the right one for you

    Would I be wrong
    If I still called
    Even on the times
    When we put our relationship on ‘pause’

    Would I be wrong
    If I didn’t know exactly what I wanted from you
    And if sometimes I questioned
    If our love was really true

    Would I be wrong
    If I thought maybe we were both confused
    And maybe we should pretend
    That we were in each other’s shoes

    Would I be wrong
    If I thought the love we once had was slipping away
    And I wanted to tell you all of these things
    But I was afraid of what you’d think or say

    Would I be wrong
    If I asked you these questions all in one night
    And baby if I’m wrong
    Will you teach me to be right

    S.A.N.A.J.
     
  2. Nisa

    Nisa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *sings* If loving you is wrongggggggggggggg I don't want to be right. Girl aint nothing about what you feeling or want to do is wrong. You go girl. Loved this poem :bowdown:
     
  3. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was a great poem and even a greater entrance....
    welcome to destee erotica223...
    feel free to drop your poetry
    anytime...i enjoyed this poem
    and how it rhymed

    one love
    khasm
     
  4. AHMOSE

    AHMOSE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    would i be wrong
    Could i be wrong
    wish my ex would lemme alone!

    Welcome to destee.com thanx for sharing.
     
  5. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You would not be wrong at all
    I like the flow all the way
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome poetic flow here

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new home u found
    welcome from above blessing you some love
    keep sharing and flowing upon family
    welcome !!!!
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much of what you want is what we all want in a relationship, so it sounds so very right to me. This piece had such a genuine touch to it. Welcome to destee poet, hope to read more from you.
     
  8. PoeticManifesta

    PoeticManifesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    great drop, welcome! And no its not wrong, i feel the same way.
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi and welcome aboard

    WOULD I BE WRONG
    If I said I love the way you stepped in the door?
    with the realness that poured like water...from your heart
    awesome piece poet, get comforable and shoot with both barrels
     
  10. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a heckuva way to introduce yourself, sister. Welcome! I am really diggin this sweet flow. Please post more! Make yourself at home.
     
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