Black Poetry : Would Be Poets

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Feb 2, 2002.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Men
    who would be poets
    dance best with strangers,
    and know how to dance
    lives spent in silent frenzy
    paying a terrible price for a beautiful verse
    while men
    who would be poets
    pay a terrible price for a beautiful verse
    with lives spent in silent frenzy
    and know how to dance,
    dance best with strangers





    (c) FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummm!

    N2 u hit me from a nother side wit dis one
    and i fell right N2 yo soulful poetic thoughts:eek:
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    I'm all smiles brotha! :D

    Thanks for read'n


    N2
     
  4. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok N2

    luuuuv the creativity in dis one
    sis. didn't see it coming, so i read
    it a couple of times, and it
    finally took hold.

    nice monday monin wake up.

    hw
     
  5. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what a scintillating,

    and wicked twist,

    the way words weave
    endlessly into, through and
    out of thirsty souls
    like so many haunted/restless spirits

    ...blinded by the faceless
    dark of night, pausing
    for just a moment to prance
    strike a prose
    and do their shameless poetic dance,
    best,
    with strangers....

    My soul's interpretation, my sista.

    Thank you

    a
     
  6. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, indeed...i'm still lovin' it ta def!
     
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    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TRUTH IN POETRY
    I applaud you
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the wordplay was tyte N2..
    you did it with this one .
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi-wa

    Much :heart: & I thank ya'..... glad you enjoyed the read...

    N2
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sustah A

    You are always flowing with me.... every step of the way.... I couldn't ask for a better support system gurl!

    Always :heart:

    N2
     
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