Black Poetry : Would Be (Finale)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Feb 2, 2002.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    They just want to dance
    strut and gyrate in the arms
    of each other
    soft, shapeless poets
    lonely with tired eyes
    looking for a place
    to sleep with nothing
    to apologize

    On the dance floor where the lights
    are burning a new meaning
    into the definition of
    worship
    where ecstacy and pain
    share the same space
    the "would be's" kick
    cruelty in the face and stalk
    a sinuous game gladly abandoning
    themselves to pleasure
    This is the last dance
    before sunrise
    and negotiated breakfasts--
    desparate alliances
    and hasty phone number
    exchanges
    separate the 'would be's'
    from those who 'are'
    ~ leave this scenario
    go home and recount
    what happend here tonight
    ...write?!





    (c) FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
  2. Giovanni

    Giovanni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****..

    i see what you were talkin' 'bout under my piece.. must've been some telepathic vibe we let off.. i was listenin' to Eric Sermon and Marvin Gaye's I'M HOT!! when I wrote that.. loved this version of the club piece 'cause it gives me a second view of club life too.. oh and yeah, your **** been hot girl.. I come and check this board for your work then I leave if you haven't post'd anything.. I'm po'addict to your poetics.. :) be easy..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow N2

    u took me in again just like dat....
    is this why i stay at home .....:D
    i'm lovin yo pen ....flow head on sis.:D
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Giovanni

    I'll just say...."see, I told you so"...:lol: telephathic communication, heat waves, smoke signals or sumthin'!! :lol:

    Thanks for the read!

    Always :heart:
    N2
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$

    Thank You, dearest one~ :wink:


    N2
     
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    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2

    anotha i-opena for ya boi.
    harsh realities in creativity.
    luv it.

    hw
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hi-wa

    Thanks for the love & for the read!! :D


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  8. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very well expressed!

    Tell it like it is poet!
    The Truth!:toast:
     
  9. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is the all-important summation

    in your powerful trilogy... very, very, VERY well spoken... and I've heard every word...

    thank you

    a
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rashad....

    Hey, thank you for peepin' in on this little ditty!!

    One :heart:

    N2