Black Poetry : worse alone

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've said times so many
    how far far better it would be
    if love or the so called loss thereof
    was in truth the extent of my drama
    how wonderful it would be to
    find sollutions so elementary
    oh so very basic and reachable
    find myself wishing for problems
    truly of that nature
    to trade with the hell I see
    yet such is the life
    the way things be
    but it would be redundant to
    try and place this hell on display
    I'll simply move day to day
    to bring down the heat
    to extinquish the fire
    while keeping my eyes peeled
    for the inevitable romance
    or happenstance
    that prospect that leads
    to life
    because no matter the drama
    it's always worse
    alone
    (c)5/03/Michael
     
  2. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice... dealing w/drama solo can be like woe... feel ya completely...

    peace
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Nadia!
    Much love to ya!
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't deal with it alone I'm here to help ya out and tha rest of tha family but until you need us thanks for blessing us with this beautiful piece very nice poet even better vibe
     
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    Solitude is attitude
    Latitude, a high ~

    Keep it up, Skrybe you flowin'!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx Serenti! That means alot to me!
    I guess venting comes with the poetic
    territory. Thanx for feelin' me!
    Much love!

    I know that's right, 1Poet!
    Much love!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling the dream of downplaying drama...searching for the simple way of dealing with life issues...coz, in the end, it's all about the happy face.:)

    continue the flow
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi skrybe7, :wave:

    Beautifully written and expressed!! I feel you!! Don't be afraid to be alone. Take the time to discover who you are and love yourself. When the time is right, love will come again. Thanks for sharing this one. Great read!!

    ~Sierra~ :)
     
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    Nice

    Loved the flow skrybe7 the message was speaking loud and clear, its always hard to deal with the issues at hand, but yet something we must do to move on, the outcome depends on how it was dealt with.... Hang tuff keep expressing yourself

    AqueenPassing


    :wave:
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    much love to ya'll, family!!
    I appreciate the love more
    than I could express!!
    if ya weren't so far away
    I'd throw up a serious :grouphug:
    Peace and blessings!!!
     
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