Black Poetry : Worlds greatest Lover

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Dec 2, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Through all my years of learning things
    One thing I must concede
    I am learning still of a woman’s wants
    And how to fulfill her need
    But truth be told we should stand up
    What are we men or mice?
    So if any should be interested
    I have a little advice
    If you come home from working late
    And still she’s cooked your meal
    Don’t mumble thanks through falling crumbs
    But tell her how you feel
    And pick up all your dirty clothes
    You don’t live in a cave
    A woman is a partner
    And not your flaming slave
    For gods sake close the toilet lid
    It’s such a simple task
    After fifteen years of married life
    She shouldn’t have to ask
    Then tell her that you love her
    Show her that you care
    You’d soon turn into a bumbling wreck
    If she wasn’t there
    Now before you straddle your high horse
    And tell me please to hush
    I follow my own advice my friends
    And the rewards still make me blush
    For every woman runs the home
    Every girl can be a mother
    But show a little romance and
    She will become the Worlds Greatest Lover

    Caramelpython 2003
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was wonderful...
    i really like this one
    i been a supporter of yours
    as you mine
    for so long and you
    always seems
    to keep surpising me
    very nice read...great message..Angel
     
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    Zen Master_1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Best advice given

    caramelpython, Yes, you hit that one right on the head, infact let's take that a bit farther, learn the act of woman talk, even if it is to sit down and view the television shows that all women love to watch for it will give you insight as to your mate or better yet your partner for without her where would you really stand?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovin ya flow of flava indeed this was another worthy scribe
    tyte
     
  5. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    again, hit me in the head, :hammer: , this is why you are poet of the week. This should be everyman's mission statement.
     
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    loving this mix of the carmel...do your thing poet of the week..as i become weak at the kness
    very nice indeed
    Peace
     
  7. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You

    My family in my travels in life I have been the hurt,
    the pain
    the love
    the lust
    the power
    the joy
    the man
    and the little boy that most women have had to deal with so I now dedicate my time to heal my sisters and be theis shield from the storm.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very well said
    Peace
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is always heartwarming to hear a brotha teach words of wisdom :bowdown: flow on and enligten us poet of the week :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let the church say, "Amen"....
     
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