Black Poetry : Working for the system

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  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    #workingonacomeup

    Do we expose
    Or
    Do we knot?
    Is the choosen
    Really
    What we suppose?
    I ask you again
    Can u see me any other way
    either 2
    expose
    knot
    choosen
    suppose
    We break it down through
    The obvious
    of not really suppose to be caring
    Not having the ability yet
    Still waiting
    To be untied from the not getting or understanding
    The simple things
    Yet
    Get the system everytime
    That's Me.
    Sitting on the jury
    Waiting for that pull.
    That ticket only given to "blessed taxpayers"
    To represent the way to judge
    Even without a 15 year stint of knowledge.
    Given back to
    Systematically having everyone have their place
    Seperate in the room of
    Doom & Redemption.
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    this is so beautiful Sister ... i feel you ... i feel you i feel you i feel you

    thanks for sharing

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I
    I know you do!
    Thank You Sister Always!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well said , I hear ya truly....
     
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