Black Poetry : Work in Progress

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Earthly Allure, Apr 9, 2004.

  1. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Completely definitive and
    rightly so.
    I dug
    deep within my
    creativity
    for a
    symbolism and abstract
    feeling of
    who I truly am.
    The music played and
    it was time for me to
    face and focus on it.
    I needed
    and I need to make
    a mark for myself on this earth,
    I need to leave
    my imprint on time itself.
    I stand outside of myself, gazing deeply within.
    Not with natural eyes, but the spiritual kin.
    Seeing deep-seated revelations
    and potentialities that exist within me.
    I am born over and over in
    a cycle of 365,
    A Phoenix
    burned by its own flame,
    only from its ashes to arise,
    I devise a method
    of earthly appeal and mellow still,
    I embrace the eccentric and afrocentric,
    reveling in the feel.
    I become my own shadow of the things
    to come, my own prophet
    of everything; a total sum.
    I am therefore,
    I exist because.
    And because I am,
    I exist.
    No longer disillusioned or
    confused,
    but fused with the other levels and facets of me;
    representing the mighty sea in all its infinite and unexplored
    glory.
    I breath,
    and form thought;
    Then I be.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wynne Publishing"
    ~Earthly Allure
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes the vibe
    tight drop
    enjoyed this one
    Peace
    Angel
     
  3. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you angel. Yo, when are we going to get down with the collabo??????*smile*
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flow was soooooooo magnetic....
    this vibe has my strong favor.................
    mo power earthly cannot wait to hear more from you cuz you're burning up!! :hot:

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  5. Earthly Allure

    Earthly Allure Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so so so so much. I'm trying to emerge myself deeper and deeper into my earthy vibe.
     
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    You definately know how to write Allure. Keep doin it please. Nice poem.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't know how much deeper you can go, but this is another example of your earthy flow, very nice.
     
  8. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo, the vibez flowin' off this was spectacular.....I love your style.....much love for this one.
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poet...I have two words for you...

    You Rock...:bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    Whoa! This is deep! Wow, sister. If this is a work in progress, please do us all a favor and flow on. Woooo
     
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