Black Poetry : work (haiku)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nytmama, Oct 2, 2001.

  1. nytmama

    nytmama Member MEMBER

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    just a mindless drone
    is he who reports to work
    without seeing life
     
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    says a lot of life itself...

    makes me think.

    nice.

    jh.
     
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    hummmmm!!!

    now this one is powerful
    mind wondering!;)
     
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    Nytmama...Welcome to Destee's

    I really loved your poem. This is what Haiku is all about...making one think and meditate on that which concerns life.

    I look forward to reading more from you.
     
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