Black Poetry : words to the wise (from the Book of James Eta)

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  1. James Eta

    James Eta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    she's my sister
    you're my brother
    not by blood
    but soul-to-soul
    tied to each other

    she can love you
    from a distance
    you have to give up
    this futile
    persistence

    don't be selfish
    cause that's what it is

    you're over there with yours
    but
    you still want what's his...


    J
     
  2. onzhay

    onzhay Active Member MEMBER

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    if i am reading this the way it was meant to be read...i am sensing a bit of coveting going on. it can be the damnedest thing. you put this one to write quite well.

    deep

    zhay
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hummmmm!!

    very well said and done poet !:toast:
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You ran read this poetry like a song. Great job
     
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