Black Poetry : Words are too feeble to explain this

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by FloeticFire, Dec 8, 2003.

  1. FloeticFire

    FloeticFire Active Member MEMBER

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    Baby please dont stop
    El papá me da más
    Smusso vi ottengo abbastanza
    See when I think of erotica
    between us
    So many words,
    languages
    thoughts come to mind
    Often times I cant seem to even
    find the right words to convey
    this feeling you have put ova me
    Él tan increíblemente complicado
    Its as if my ancestors' passions of before
    climb inside my soul
    And pronouced
    you to be the greatest lover
    of past lovers before you
    See our passions are like oral histories
    of tribes before
    Although its taboo to speak of
    you inherit every breath,
    every drop of love
    that was used to create you
    Erotica is situational
    It can take over mind body and soul
    Things you knew before
    make little sense
    Things that you thought took you to that spot
    Are but past amatuer bouts
    of love
    of lust
    What we have before us is like
    fire to wood
    water to earth
    we go round and round
    There is no distinction
    between my begining and your end
    We connect sexually
    spirtually,politically, intimately...
    purposefully
    Erotica is just one spectrum
    of this endless
    desire to please, and to be
    and experience
    each others
    ... as kindered souls
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    this was a nice flow right here
    keep da pen on lock
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was awesomely done
    of da deeper passion of love
    within da soul milking out to
    canvas flow on and let it drip !
    tyte
     
  4. FloeticFire

    FloeticFire Active Member MEMBER

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    As always Rich and Khasm thanks for the love...I vibe so much in this place..Thanks for the opportunity

    Peace
     
  5. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek:hmy: I loved this and the mixtures of language proving its hard to find words. You go, this was oh so HOT
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :read: Loved this read.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep passion from within..
    loves this flow...
    yea lock that pen and flow on...
    nice inded :angel1:
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa :jawdrop: nelly this is :hot: !! Love the spanish-english mixture, girl. Flow on!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You were really flowing on this, showing real poetic style.
     
  10. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm REALLY likin' this...
     
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