Quiet Poetry Lounge : words are not enough...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sahara heart, Feb 11, 2005.

  1. sahara heart

    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fear that i had lost you
    that i had brought this upon myself
    and would never find my way home
    you brought me angels i never recognized
    saved me from more pain
    but i never noticed
    all the love, all the tears, all the effort
    that was meant just for me.
    spring is here and like the flowers blooming.
    my heart swells with life, love, laughter, and joy
    mourns, grieves and aches... worse still, it bleeds
    for all the times i rejected you
    told myself i could do it alone
    all the while longing for you
    with me, in me, there....
    ALWAYS
    funny it took me this long
    to realize something so obvious
    tall mountains i have yet to climb, wider rivers to cross
    one thing remains true
    i am reassured that You will be with me all along the way...

    Shalom
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so heart felt surely one will be by your side
     
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    robryant1106 Active Member MEMBER

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    Words aren't enough to explain how much I like this piece!!!
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DELICIOUS!



    BOLD BOLD! :callme:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When love calls, it pays to listen. Unconditional love ...lingers forever. very nice piece.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a beautiful realization to discover what has been there all along, and it is not too late to do something about it. Touching piece.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    words can't express how deep this was felt too
    keep venting .
     
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    sahara heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all so much for the positive feedback. God bless u and keep u safe always. Peace and Love.
    Sahara heart
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww, this is beautiful! keep em comin
     
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    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very niec piece. Words arent enough to express how you feel about someone. Loved every line. Really really enjoyed readin your piece. :heart: :heart:
     
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