Black Poetry : word play

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by THA HOOKUPMAN, Oct 30, 2004.

  1. THA HOOKUPMAN

    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    im bout to play ...yawl ready

    poetic love inspiringly uncovers, undefined contaminates
    yearning transforming, cynically loved lovers into sacrifices,
    bloating infinity pitilessly putrefies, into exterminate
    singing .....you digg me?

    melting realization blisteringly mystifies, from demise
    squelching delusion halfheartedly repulses lexicographers,
    squeaking infinity ferociously ravages, to paraphrase a
    bragging world kindheartedly putrefies a hater.

    fuming illusion halfheartedly inseminates, of philosophical
    jock riding stars chaotically emerge appoint,
    gangling exhaltation breathtakingly hibernates, undefined canonical
    foreboding death impatiently vanishes a hater mofucka.

    squealing transformation arduously inseminates, of porous
    leering desire pitifully regurgitates warrant,
    floating realization coldheartedly vanishes, before infelicitous
    grumbling structures infectiously hugging your heart

    rumbling poetry haters offensively resonate, into hacks feeling relentless in their hates needing to all vanish
    squirming ascensions quiescently recognizing,
    im a dope *** poet and u and your mama know it.

    my poems indolently acquiesce, of profusion
    laughing love horrifically unshackles the abysmal,
    drifting thought clamorously recovers, of oppressed poets
    moaning for explosion acting powerlessly, acting like they cant write
    from the soul....

    sluggish hater fantasy vanishes, into prosperous
    searching rage frustratingly abandons hoax,
    shrieking feeling forbiddingly intensifies,
    when u see u can flow like the winds blow
    praying thoughts disturbingly intoxicate,
    quibbling ascension luminously discovers your fly as the one u hatein on
    blowing ecstasy unbrokenly reappears, into fainthearted mismatched flows
    now a
    floating illusion despicably uncovers a true poetic sculptor.

    gusting transformation querulously putrefies, during seminal
    braying feeling innocently beseeches coronation,
    hoping ecstasy hypnotically resonates, during conventional hate
    screaming world approvingly uncovers..... you are betta than u thought u was ..huh cuz......hookup :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :thinking: :drink:
     
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    dis word play was str8 phat and off da hook !!!!
    it's a masterminded play poeticly ....tyte write Hookup ))))
     
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    Oh the wonders of what the pen can truly do when we just let if flow. How can this be described? The word play does more than just play with our minds, it directs are minds to the point where we are shaking our heads, at least, I am. Flow on poet.
     
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    WOW..! this was too nice...I mean you have my mind goin at like a million miles per second, this should have been brocken into like 3 parts, cuz its so much that you are to take in...I mean i really loved this...thanks for sharin....most definately "Keep Em Comin"...1 :welldone: :hearts2: :welldone:
     
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    THANK U ALL FOR READING ME.....HOOKUP :thinking: :thinking:
     
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    LIKEWISE my Brutha Hookup !
     
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    this was nice but no way was this wordplay look i know what wordplay is can't pass this by me at all just some nice vocab
     
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    The artist was at work in this piece
    Word Play...or Mind Play...or rather a Play of Measure
    in the assessment of Intellecuality...or possibly
    even "Consciousness"...

    The snoring has become Incessant...
    Continue to sculpt...Art is infectuous
    once it takes hold...
    Sage
     
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