Black Poetry : word play

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Nov 15, 2003.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I don’t mine if you intertwine
    In my mind..
    We already crossed the line
    So come enjoy it…
    You can touch me here
    Come on ova here…
    Kiss me like dat
    Love me like dat
    Move my soul
    Heart beatin fast..
    Heat risen
    Caress an all dat
    I don’t mine if you intertwine
    In my mind..
    See it
    Love it
    Come to it..
    Intertwine
    It be all fine…
    Can you do it
    Can you feel it
    Can you make it…
    Want it
    Yearn it
    Just crave it….
    Then….
    Take it…
    Heart
    Body
    And
    Soul……
    Don’t miss it..
    Unfold it come define it….
    I don’t mine if you intertwine
    In my mind..
    Compassionately
    Romantically
    Intertwine if your
    Drinkin fine wine…
    I don’t mine if you intertwine
    In my mind..
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    mindful togetherness
    as a whole within
    da love is kissed
    very nice scribe poetess
     
  3. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    really vibin on your flow here, sister.
     
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    nice scribe angel
    i enjoy your work
     
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    I LOVE this, you play on words is beautiful. A lot of people just don't make sense when they try to write like this, but you do it so well.
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :toast:
    thanks fam...fo :thanks:
    your love n support
    :angel1:
     
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