Khasm13 : word play...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    i lick up lakes
    and abate debates
    as momentum translates into rhythm
    all my skills i pit them
    against mentalities that be like
    stick em
    ha haha
    stick em
    cause my black youth im trying to pick em
    up
    life is ruff and tuff
    and stacked up against all of us
    and derelict delinquents dine from dawn to dusk
    if your glass joe
    a chin check is a must
    i gots a lust
    for metaphors
    unlocking coridors
    in da center of da cerebral core
    i'll insert som ill adverbs on your nerves
    to put your reality on a slant
    and make you search for daylight like ramp
    my stamp of approval
    might sound unusual
    i don't want to lose yall
    but i got the call of the wild
    that's why bufflo's stampeding
    is my greeting
    i set my sight on defeating
    the devil with words
    with no deleting
    and i still have to worry about him cheating
    and trying to rearrage my seating
    punks step up for a beating
    that's when my lyrical sword starts unsheating
    sometimes when you get caught sleeping
    you slept your last sleep
    cause percussions of repercussions cut deep
    and on da dl creep
    comes da grim reap
    so don't play reality cheap
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep and tyte as always thanks for droppin this one on us much luv :)
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man ya off da hook today !!!!
    wow ya scribe is banggin' in awesome aroma
     
  4. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whhhoooooooooo!!! I like this right CHERE!!! yeah, I said chere!
     
  5. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So so smooth...
     
  6. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    thanks fam...
    i forgot about this one...:wink:
    peace
    khasm
     
  7. emprezz

    emprezz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Positive vibes you bringin today. Big up to you for acknowledgin the youth.
     
  8. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    AWWH... feelin that... i'm loving ya word play... :)

    peace
     
  9. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok, I was kinda late on readin this one, but I got there all the same. You know, your stuff always reminds me of freestyle fridays on 106 & Park, you would always be the champ!!

    I say this in awe
     
  10. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Khasm13 this is wonderful..oh wow .. i love those word play..feeling the heat...quote "percussions of repercussions cut deep "..let it flow..much love
    Peace
     
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