Black Poetry : Word Play (Part 2)

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love in T Major

    Thoughts towering,
    typically tailored towards torture,
    trying to tread through
    though
    too
    terrified to tell
    that
    this tremoring transformation
    translates
    to
    the truth

    Sing Another….

    Sing another
    scintillating song
    in the soothing soprano of love
    smooth my soul, solely, and surely,
    singularly assuring me
    that you + me
    was meant to be,
    it transfuses us
    setting us free,
    you settle my fears,
    with your wondrous ways
    fulfilling, energizing, breathtaking, pleasing
    sing another song….of you
    it’s music to my ears


    Constants

    Loving, hating,
    fearing, failing,
    breathing, breaking,
    rebuilding, remembering,
    growing, giving,
    succeeding, taking,
    choices, mistakes,
    enemies, friends,
    lovers, heartaches,
    revenge, amends,
    strangers, family,
    danger, safety,
    beginnings, endings,
    dyings, dying

    that’s life
     
  2. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are a wonderful Poet Tarheel....
    Your creativity is so unique and amazing..
    Perfect read!!!!!!
    I 'll be looking for mo' from ya....
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as usual this piece is beautiful !!!!
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm lovin' it, absolutely...jus lovin' yo word play. keep on scribin'!


    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
  5. Amun-Ra

    Amun-Ra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Playful!

    Word is just that--what you have done is give us a chance to explore along withyou--well done!

    Amun-Ra

    :toast:
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for sharing this talent and
    play on words...
    these poems are very well done!
    -7:spinstar:
     
  7. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love, fam....it means alot....and know that it returns full circle, every time I read the creative masterpeaces that each one of you scribe....keep it up

    much love,

    MJ
     
  8. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    'Scuse my french, but

    ****, you're brilliant. Them constants really gave my cognit wheel a spin. :thanks:
     
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    Tarheel Poet,

    May I just say I'm lovin what you do with words..

    Keep on flowin...

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  10. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) Thanks for the latest reads and responses....everyone has been so receptive, and the praise is heartfelt.

    Nia--I'm so glad I could get your wheel spinning....because your peaces have mine rotating constantly....thanks for the love

    epiphany & sherykah--thank you both so much, I appreciate your responses greatly

    all of you ladies, keep scribin' (because I love your work so much :D )

    MJ
     
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