Black Poetry : Word Play (Part 1)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DigginThaShyne, Sep 26, 2002.

  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Train Station Debate

    Stuck
    contemplating
    debating
    hating the waiting
    negating…..any and all bad thoughts

    Tired
    pacing
    mind racing
    lacing itself with poison
    and facing….possibility of bad news

    Relieved
    she’s coming
    engine humming
    ears no longer drumming
    summing up my fears….to paranoia


    Delicate Tastes

    I’ll slowly
    explore and implore
    all your regions
    before
    and after,

    you satisfy me with kisses
    that move just like laughter

    flowing and growing,
    slowing only
    for showing

    the advantage of taking your time



    Blues Song

    Baby, I ain’t complaining,
    I’m just asking for my due ….

    Baby, I ain’t complaining,
    I’m just asking for my due….

    You
    manipulate
    and agitate
    acerbate
    and frustrate

    You
    jeopardize
    and victimize
    then hypnotize
    with those sexy thighs

    Baby, I ain’t complaining,
    I’m just asking for my due….

    Unfortunately, I’m starting to see…
    baby, looks like I’m stuck with you
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes this one here
    with the changing scenes and
    voice...
    this is a cool shower on a hot
    summer's day with the fresh
    floating smell of fruit...
    thank you.
    -7:spinstar:
     
  3. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    these are great!! i love that you are able to get your feelings/thoughts across with very few words!!
     
  4. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm lovin' these, too. keep on scribin'.
     
  5. Amun-Ra

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    Nice Flow!

    Shifting gears all the way through--Well done--Amun-Ra

    :toast:
     
  6. Nia Maishani

    Nia Maishani Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was WELL worth

    postponing my own scribing.

    The work is just brilliant. I can't even say more about it. Could you be more on point with the Delicate Tastes? I think not! And that's a Blues flow to rival even old heads. I mean it.
     
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