Black Poetry : word place

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsDLite, Jul 26, 2001.

  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...just thinking...
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    simple in form
    lines and curves
    they resemble familiar
    shapes...letters
    they have their
    place...
    laid so gently
    for cognitive recognition
    stimulants with a drug-like
    effect on our spirit...
    our physical...

    i love you
    you i love...

    words have
    a place to hold
    a space to fill
    a purpose to fulfill...
    however they are spilled...

    i close my arms
    my arms i close...
    to kiss you
    kiss to you...
    you hold me tightly within
    tightly you hold me within...

    in the evening of your day
    as you reminisce on
    times expired
    and begin to flow
    the melody in
    you soul...poetry
    know
    that there is a
    place...
    for words

    MsDLite (c) 07.01
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautiful!

    beautiful, this is!

    Speak Poetess!!!!!! Speak to me early and often!!!!!!


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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    PLACE SO WELL

    EVERY WORD IN SYNC
    LINED SWEETLY AND SMOOTH
    U FLOW ON SIS...........:kiss:
     
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    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know...

    sometime life is so
    simple...

    it is our human idiosyncrasies
    that make it complex...

    simply...words are amazing
    and if we take a step back...
    and really see what they do
    to us
    for us
    ...perhaps we will appreciate them
    and use them carefully...

    thanks for reading...
    ...and i will submit my words...
    in their place...
    early...late...and often :)
     
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