Black Poetry : Word of mouth

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  1. tzevi1278

    tzevi1278 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a public service announcement to all the ladies in the house;
    don’t get caught up in the word of mouth.
    And by caught up, I mean caught up indeed,
    cause this kind of drama, you really don’t need.
    Now ladies gone gossip and the ish won’t stop,
    but you really got to watch what you say in these shops.
    Cause the walls have ears and home wreckers do too,
    and you ain’t really got control of who’s listening to you.
    Now you and your home girl decide to get your hair done,
    and you tell her you think that you found the right one.
    “Girl he looks good, smells good and plays with the kids.
    He’s got a good job, a car and a crib.
    Takes me out and pays the whole bill,
    and when we’re alone I can’t take the whole pill.
    He’s the real-deal for real and I’m feeling his style”,
    but when he walks in the shop, he’s getting extra smiles.
    Tanya, Kiesha, and even Carlene,
    all making moves for a spot on his team.
    And you can’t get mad, cause you could have been discreet,
    but instead you decided to put all your ish in the street.

    Now scenario two is probably most common,
    cause most woman confide in at least one friend.
    For the past two months you’ve been telling your girl
    that the new man you with is the best in the world.
    “Girl you should’ve seen how he made my toes curl
    then put an arch in my back that exposed my black pearl.
    Licked me up and down then back up again,
    made me cum three times before he even put it in.
    I tried to go down but couldn’t fit it in my mouth,
    cause he was hung like a slave trying to escape from the big house.
    He twisted out my back like an acrobat on crack
    and I really couldn’t react so I throw it right back.
    Dude was gentle, attentive and let me be myself,
    but by the third session he had me hanging from a shelf.”
    Little do you know, your girl’s plotting as you speak;
    cause the last man she had, was weak and obsolete.
    And the thought of multiple orgasms really sounds sweet,
    to a chick that hasn’t had d*ck in d*mn near six weeks.
    Once again, you got caught up in the rapture,
    and if you slip up your girl’s out for the capture.
    You basically gave him a letter of recommendick-tation,
    and made a large contribution to the “donate a d*ck” foundation.

    Now scenario three is as foul as can be,
    cause the home wrecker fell from your family tree.
    You find another good man and now you’re elated,
    “I can tell my cousin cause sh*t, we related.”
    So you tell her the good stuff, details and all,
    and she doesn’t even sweat it until sometime next fall.
    See her man kicked her out and she needs a place to sleep,
    and you being the cousin you are, let’s her stay for a few weeks.
    Now all the while, she’s peeping how well your man treats you
    and wonders to herself “that could be me too.”
    So you run off to work, none the wiser
    and your cousin’s at the crib with dinner, and Budweiser.
    Now your man feeling right, cause he’s belly full on fight night.
    He’s loving the way the night’s going so far,
    then your cousin walks in looking like his favorite porn star
    with nothing on her body but a thong and a bra.
    And we all know what happened, no need to elaborate;
    I’m merely trying to demonstrate the problems words can create.
    For many men this is more of a blessing then a curse,
    but in my situation, it only gets worse.
    See it makes me feel good that I keep my woman happy
    but I’m sick of all her friends trying to throw the pus*y at me.
    So women if you want help curb the temptation squash the word of mouth and you can ease our frustration.


    Copyright 2004
    © Kiastar inc. Krate Creations publishing
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved the witty style that you penned this in. Sometimes we get so excited and just want to share what we have, not thinking of the consequences of what we speak of. Not all women are like this, but yes, there are some. Tight vibe.
     
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    very nicely done and posed poeticly
     
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    If she want to keep walking on both of her legs...
    stay the hell out my house and the bed where I laids,

    But I know how to shake it, and I know how to bake em
    when I turn my man out ...can't no woman take him

    When he wants me and needs me...I''m always there
    soooooo
    if she can beat me "rocking" ...she can have my chair​
     
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    A word to the wise, read TZEVi1278 ~
     
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    Let the TRUTH be heard... :hearthis:
    sometimes the blade can fall hard
    and it can hurt...
    but there's one thing that can't be denied
    the lesson in this piece is on point

    Kudos, poet. Love the play on words in the second scenario...

    made a large contribution to the “donate a d*ck” foundation.


    this line was classic...

    Do yo thang poet...Do yo thang!
     
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    :hammer: This is a lession that all the ladies should learn indeed. Your poem is a classic poet and it was a pleasure to read up in here. :wchair:
     
  8. BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE

    BLAQ LOVE POURAHTREE Nefertum Husia Shayheh MEMBER

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    (fore myself)

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