Black Poetry : (Word) Bound for Home (Base)

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Standing underneath the lamplight
    My mind is blown outta proportion...
    Daym this natural high got me trippin...
    Reverb is the word that these words are admittin
    Flow like a current which keeps fallin and slippin
    Into the drops of ink in which my pen withholds
    Trying to let a untold story unfold
    But its so hard for me to explain da unknown
    Abnormal ways are a facility which I reside in
    But normality has a natural way of constantly lyin
    So again my thoughts stream through my body
    Like da blood through my veins
    Lyrics and stanzas flyin out
    Just like my untamed mane
    I mean, can you feel my flame?
    Fists are frequently flying high by
    Fighters who don't realize
    Nothing that matters ever changes
    Because of people who are set in their ways
    Da dew is drowning a damper on my day
    Don't quite know how to make
    My life da right(write)ous way
    My pupils place pathetic people
    In front of my vision everyday
    Let sunlight purify whatever I may grace
    My touch is not worthy of being placed
    In beautiful nature's face
    So all I can do is touch
    Da humilifying shell of society
    And let my weapons pen and paper
    Speak instead of letting my breath waste quietly
    Stared at by intriguing, mysterious eyes
    Which unveil all that life holds for a suprise
    The ranson for this mystery is a price thats too high
    Yet mobile millionaires make millions
    Which can reach to the clouds
    We sell our souls daily to try to make ourselves look proud
    Though we all are ashamed
    Because we know that Earth cannot be gained
    By material goods- no, AMERICA claims dat name
    And holds dat fame
    But if this is the only place
    Where one can prove grace
    Then that makes you simply another waste of space
    Void from being and
    Null from feeling
    Addictive substances both abstract and concrete
    Are reaching to grab purity by the feet
    And gobble it up as if it's a piece of meat...

    Finally you will learn something about me
    See, to be honest, I'm not too unique
    You might see me as just another gal in da street
    But I bring a heat that will bring you to yo knees
    And it's not from heredity
    Nor the extreme place of fee
    It is the words of my soul, which makes me, me.
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soul on ice!
     
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    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    [email protected],
    yo sho nuff did bring the heat on those...
    keep em coming...
    peace
    khasm
     
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    hey play
    feeling you
    on this flow
    loud and clear
    poet of the week
    keep it :roll:
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes i agree u laid it out and down
    ya flow in wooooweeee!
    da way poet of da week can do it !
    keep flowin'
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHOooooaaa! :) jus dayum dayum dayum...come wit it i was tied down by this right here
     
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    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Play, :wave:

    WOW!! Great flow!!

    Shine on Poet Of the Week!!

    ~Sierra~ :heart:
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A free mind is a powerful mind!

    What a way to lay it down! This is what H.Rap Brown said many years ago ...."Free yo *** and yo mind will follow!"


    Blessings On Ya House!


    *GET UP STAND UP!
     
  9. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank chu, all of you, for all da love!!!

    Much appreciated!!!

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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