Black Poetry : wondering

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Auroraflower, Aug 6, 2010.

  1. Auroraflower

    Auroraflower Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    stare





    stare


    look up
    clouds


    imagine




    where




    what
    you do..?





    where
    who

    is


    you...






    turn
    pillow
    blow



    poef!











    i sigh.

    ok ..up up ,forget about that
    there is much work to do








    Jezus....


    guide....










    in Gods time...



    do i have persmission ?










    my love....





    i,m
    wondering...









    in wonder






    off







    u
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wandering

    I heard you
    Creeping ‘round my mental
    Peeping all the things I’ve been through
    …Just to be with you




    It’s true



    I’m

    in

    wonder

    Of

    u

    Constantly
    Wondering about you
    And all the things I’d like to do

    To

    u




    Got me

    D
    .R
    ..O
    …O
    ….L
    …..I
    ……N
    …….G

    Over those thoughts

    Of

    u



    Mentally stalking
    u

    Replaying each moment
    With u


    Listening


    Reminiscing




    Walking…
    Watching



    Strollings…
    Along memory’s shore


    A casualty of wanting



    MoRe


    Of
    u


    Imagining
    “It had to be” thinkings



    Thinking…

    Of

    u and I



    Pondering



    “Wondering”



    Why?





    ~ PeRmIsSiOn GrAnTeD
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully laid sis as i wonder in sweet mist !
     
  4. moham

    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hiding in the clouds
    playing and singing out loud
    sliding off sunrays
    enjoying waterdrops and rainbow lollipops...

    uuuhm need to come back and finish this...sis :) ..
    your piece was sweet and familiar. You need to post more work.

    Hugs n kisses
    from the other side of the ocean
     
  5. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    woowwwwwwwwwww very nice
    I enjoyed.........

    keep flowing you two

    I'm sitting here wondering
    what will take place next? lol
    :qqb015:
     
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