Black Poetry : Wondering...

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply...Wondering...

    Wondering...
    What will be
    When the minds
    meet the flesh and see
    the reactions to such a
    long anticipated meeting
    the first eye contact, twinkling
    windows to the soul, greeting,
    hi baby, hello sweetheart
    smiles, filling each other with
    a bright rays of sunshine
    realizing that this is actually
    the soul who claims to be mine
    drawn into that passionate kiss
    electrical charge coursing
    through the intense bliss
    embracing with blanketed wings
    feeling a warmth that only
    a heaven sent commitment brings
    the tears, jointly flowing, overflowing
    with glee as our spiritual song sings...

    Wondering...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was nice like how u laid it out
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your support is always appreciated brotha Rich, thank you.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    wondering huh?...nice to do
    look forward to part two
    when you move from wondering
    and do :peace: :peace:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Part two has me really wondering deepy, lol. Thank you for your support on this sis.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful in each and every line. I hope it turns out the way you want it, sister. Can't wait for part 2. :slobber:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for your kind words gempis. :) @ that smilie.
     
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    Just speak it and it shall pass my sister your power is inside of you and it is just waiting to release from within. Pt 2...Yes I shall be waiting on myself. :terrific:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, there appears to be a line forming for pt. 2, lol. Python, you have a knack for showing another side to a situation, and I appreciate that. Thank you brotha.
     
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    aww sis wats..



    this is beautifulll poetry painted with visionary colours...




    loved it..





    Lovelibertylady:heart:
     
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