Quiet Poetry Lounge : Wondering

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CreativeExpress, Nov 19, 2004.

  1. CreativeExpress

    CreativeExpress Active Member MEMBER

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    I know I seem to be starring
    you're probably wondering
    what's got my gaze

    You're this sight
    that captures me
    and though I know its not right, you see
    I have a mate, our meeting was fate
    and he is the reason these emotions I hate

    This emotion of which I speak
    is what I feel when we meet
    you take a seat, I shuffle my feet
    my nerves pounce just like a cheetah
    and though I know its wrong
    I'm dyin to meet ya

    It's like your forbidden
    in my soul-mate filled world
    I know I'm kidding myself
    you've probably got a girl

    But still the urge
    to catch your eye remains
    every other day to see you is the same

    you come in and down you sit
    my body stiffens
    I taste my spit
    I wanna look at you, feel your eyes
    but I can't seem to will movement
    in my thighs

    And my mind says no
    don't look, don't long
    to let my crush die
    because it's wrong

    You see
    I'm not free
    I can't go
    and the trance of your eyes
    will only discourage the broken resistance
    I must sew

    and in the background
    I'll stay, my heart a flutter
    my infatuation tucked away
    in love with one
    but about the other...daydreamin
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome scribing ......flow on !
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    uppin dis one back
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes this happens in life, as long as we don't act upon it, we stay out of trouble. Loved the genuine feel of this poet.
     
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    I'm really feeling this! Love your poetic style. I can relate to this as a life experience.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...the dualities of the heart
    are what legendary love stories
    are made of...

    the love...lost
    the love...never touched
    the love...that should have been, but couldn't

    Very nice poet!
     
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    whew, had 2 shake my head and come back to reality..

    U had me day dreamin with U!

    :hearts2: is :hearts2:
     
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