Black Poetry : Wondering...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by phenomenalwoman, Sep 21, 2004.

  1. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Another night
    of sitting here
    Wondering why I cant sleep
    Another night of trying to figure out my emotions
    Why do they run so deep
    Another night
    of questioning
    Am I going down the same road again
    Too perfect to be my lover
    Too cool to be my friend
    This man is so unreal
    Sometimes I cant believe
    That he is here on his own free will
    This brotha's got my back ya'll
    Cant figure out what i did to deserve him
    Just one more thing to contemplate
    As i sit here wondering
     
  2. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Once again tyte scribe. I feel this on in particular! :spin:
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When it all seems too good to be true, you can't help but wonder. I've been there, perhaps I am. I liked the genuine feel of this scribe.
     
  4. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks blatina and watz for commenting on my piece
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sometime it hit so fast we wonder deep , love ya flow of wonderment
     
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    Revel in the moment as we revel in your thoughts.
     
  7. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes it hit fast and hard, i revel in the moment everyday. thanks rich and 1poetsought
     
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    Enjoy your man and wonder no more
    you seem to have someone special
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful drop Sis, that bro should be :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww, I likes this!!!! It was so sweet.
     
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