Black Poetry : Wondering Heart

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  1. ScorpioRising

    ScorpioRising Member MEMBER

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    We journey our separate roads in past lives and this

    As Rose vines grow, we interwine and branch

    I know you so well
    As if a seed sprouting in my thoughts

    But at times I look at you
    Memorable as a stranger

    Though my eyes cannot capture
    Tears and joy and anger you fashion

    We walk this path, at times reluctantly, in hand
    Two souls forever created and destroyed in the other's image

    My heart strengthens within the boundaries you erect
    Your heart wonders beyond the doubt I impose on you

    And seasons of our souls pass into this cycle
    I take your energy as you receive mine

    Spending it on needless things
    We repeat our sorrows and relive our happiness

    But I want to live endlessly in your love and you in mine
    Creating new sorrows and new happiness

    Growing fresh laughters in seasons yet to be weathered

    I begin my love so your suffering ends
    I start us on an untrottened path
    I commence my life in the birth of your joy
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice piece poet, flow on
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This pulled me in so deeply...
    I didn't want this peace to end
    this was "Art"...
    Lovely flow...Feeling it...
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome to destee.com
    very lovely piece of art here
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    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :toast: Welcome to our family poet you work is very nice indeed. Keep ya pen moving and do your thing on here we are all watching and reading! :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nicely done .........
    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & peace
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    flow on welcome within u kin now
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was so endearing, well felt and very well written. Welcome to destee, can't wait to read more.
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome.......Welcome

    :wave:
    I too am diggin ya floE as well as ur style
     
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