Black Poetry : Wondering A World

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  1. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I was 22 I could not comfortably look at porn
    It was as disgusting as my dad’s touch
    An unnatural thing
    Where I did not get the need for communal viewing
    A shared experience for what purpose

    This sexual thing is over rated and played up to the tenth power
    There is a reason that we are demanded to focus on our nakedness
    It is a drug of a continual masturbatory process
    When we are sexually aroused it plays with pleasure centers in our brain
    Like a high it is a feeling we want to prolong infinitum

    So I am wondering if the world is being thrown into one big orgasm
    Lasting days and months and years
    If they are kept in a high state for whatever reason
    Can we make more of them puppets for the cause

    AIDS
    It is not a gay disease
    Was there an uncalculated benefit when it was released
    eradicating a large population of undesirables
    A conspiracy theory I have been contemplating for a while
    Is poor health care of the masses a way to increase HIV infections
    They say a vaccine is almost available
    yet I wonder if enough people have died yet
    If the ploy for population control and increasing European numbers is over
    Think about it a radical opportunity to become the moral majority again

    The browning of America may not matter
    If they are dead, HIV infected, imprisoned
    and their children have white mothers
    Don’t you see white people make better parents
    Poverty is the worst parent of all
    Makes us abandoned our children to garbage heaps in search of food
    Children begging on third world streets
    For the change of tourism is a high minimum wage

    Hepatitis C
    On rise in diplomatic communities
    Where diplomacy dictates we do not inform the people
    Of a lethal poison to our system
    We teaching sedation in our school
    While we medicate the ones who might challenge us later

    Somebody please turn on the alarm clock
    The world sleeps in a deadly game of our perpetual hell
    Is there anyone in charge anymore
    Or are we on an automatic high
    Where we do not need oppressor anymore
    For we are set to self destruct

    Patrice C. Queen
     
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    so on point we have sliped and slide into our own destruction and pit fall
    this was a great wake up call sista .....keep expressing the needs and self
     
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    As quiet as its' kept, "Alarm" ..is what put us in a deep coma,
    we know that, if it put us to sleep, it would take "Alarms" ..to wake us up!

    Truer words have long been spoken, excellent piece of wisdom spilled.
     
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    So sad, but so true.

    We are all lamenting the lethargy of our people, and those who try to force it on us.

    THANK you Sister Patrice. Your words were hard and painful, and have stabbed me deep.

    ~Ikoro

    (ps.: I realize the pornography thing is a personal issue and so on, but I think it is disgusting and demeaning to the one being watched and the watcher. The words "carnal" and "sin" comes to mind, and I am not even Christian. I, also am not comfortable with it. Thought I was the only one there for a while. Whew. Much love.)
     
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    Thank You RICH

    I look forward to reading your continuing comments

    I am sure many here look forward to your words

    Peace

    Patrice
     
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    It's morning

    So important to wake up to our lives

    Thanks Queen

    Peace
    Patrice
     
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    I am not against pornography. I am just against pornography that uses and abuses women and children which include teenage boys. Even in what is termed legal pornography there are so many aspects of coersion and abuse that one has to wonder what true consent is. However i think that if there were legal aspects of this then it would change the business. Unless we deal with the issues of humanity and poverty then we will be forever caught up in the darkside of this. We need to stop promoting loose values and cross gender whoredom that relieves us of personal responsibility of ones sexuality. We have not even touch on the other gender and issues of gender that are exploited in this venue, not to mention the increase in anime that further creates a magnificient dissociation.
     
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    So true, if we spend most of our time "high", constantly searching for ways to maintain that euphoric state, then we can't pay attention to more important matters, and what matters is killing us. Some pieces should be put on a banner somewhere so all could read, this is one of them.
     
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