Black Poetry : Women (lookin for someone to finish this one, male or female.)

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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There are two types of women in this world,
    The one you marry and the one you f*%k.
    Now last night when I came home,
    I got confused. The way you hugged
    Me and then guided me to the floor
    As soon as I stepped in the house.
    And then entered me from the
    Front and the back. And when you were
    Done you didn’t even bother to help
    Me up. It was so quick I could
    Have confused yo *** with a mirage.
    But it was you; I knew your touch,
    Your words, your hands, your
    Lips, I even knew the slinging pipe
    Between your legs. But you
    Could have confused me.
    There are four types of women in
    This world. One who take s%&t, one
    Who makes s#%t, One who ain’t s@%t,
    And one who IS da s*&t.
    Up until last night, I didn’t
    Take yo s&%t, I didn’t have
    To make no s&^t, I hadn’t been
    Treated like s%#t, and I was da
    S&$t.

    thanks ya'll in advance no rush just flow. peace and blessins. :)
     
  2. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    or it could be a callabo just let me know :)
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa...this one's the truth...I'll give it a go.

    Last night, I got confused by your approach to me.
    I've never felt like this before, now your actions are messing with my head ya see?
    You left me on my back staring at the ceiling,
    Then you walked away not even caring how I was feeling.
    Did another woman mess with your mentals?
    You better come with a good excuse cause I'm bout to rearrange yo dentals.
    Like I said, I've never been the one to take yo sh**, make up sh**, and you never treated me like sh**.
    I'm not sure what's going on with ya, but I hate to tell ya, I'm not havin' it.
    I'm not Tamia and I don't like strangers in my house or in me!
    Raise up outta here man, but before you go, help me up off my knees.
    Your behavior makes me think of Blackmajic and her hot grease and grits.
    But you're not worth it, I'll continue to exist and I'll definitely continue being THE SH**!!!
     
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    man that was deep. I might try:
    Last night when u took me home
    you treated me like i was your queen on a throne
    when i decided to let u in
    i didn't mean to make u sin
    but the way u took advantage of me
    i didn't know whether to stay or flee
    it was over soo fast i didn't know what to do
    the way you left me on the floor i wanted to slap you
    now u try and make me feel like sh**
    and u know what i ain't down with it
    next time i see you down the street
    u better keep walking and hope we don't meet
    when u see me you better walk fast
    cause please believe you can kiss my ***
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    y'all rockin on !
    i can't say all dat
    coz i'm not on my back
    but babe i'll never leave u like dat
    see dis stuff is all whack
    so many shootin' smack
    see i know what it takes
    i'll never play da game
    it only leave me to shame
    wit a name to blame
    and i see who's da s#!t
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks all ya'll I'm bout to get ready to post it all on here in a lil I really appreciate it tho peace and blessins
     
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    Okay...that was deep...um, let me see if I could flow a lil' somethin', somethin'!

    The way you hugged me, guided me to the floor as soon as I stepped in the door, how you entered me from the front and the back, we didn't even make it to the sack...it was so fast, but I went with the flow seduced by your familiar touch, kiss, smell...I went with the flow, seduced by your hands, your words, your sling...I went with the flow cause you seduced me, I couldn't think between shots of arrows you shot inside me...it was fast, too fast to think, or ask why we ain't movin' slow, this isn't the way we normally go...but you was still shootin' and I was too busy enjoyin'...uh...uh..ah and then it was over, you rolled over stood up didn't even think to help me up, didn't hold me in your arms, just left me on the floor, watching you walk out the door, I never took your sh*t, never made sh*t and I was DA SH*T
    what happen...who's that stranger that walked into my house and inside me...I don't know that man who seduced me with familarities of you. What's this sh*t all about...better come clean...or I'm gonna jump on you like a mexican jumping bean!! and the last thing you'll see is my A** walkin' out on YOU.
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UH-OH Cat that was goooooooooooddddddd feelin it feelin it welcome to the family gurl!!! Hope you enjoy the poems. But on the real I liked that that was a tight flow I can't wait till I finish all this up. Peace and blessins can't wait to hear some mo flows. :)
     
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    i was going to jump in
    but my reality is very nasty..

    ya'll had some tight flows on this piece...luv
    peace
    khasm
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nah nah come on now Khasm I wanna hear your view on things unrestricted to my eyes your flows are the best. speak your mind I always speak mine. I'm not gone pressure you but I would really like to hear your piece. Thanks in advance for just reading it peace and blessins keep flowin poet
     
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