Black Poetry : Women for the Mile...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by shaneak, May 30, 2002.

  1. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What exactly do we women feen for?

    WOMEN FOR TH MILE....

    We'll walk that straight path...
    Climb the high and narrow...
    Drown in the our own sorrow...
    For that man...

    Give up everything we have...
    Take care of a fatherless child...
    Bearing the seeds of a Brutal Man...
    Still Lost...
    Walking in SAND...

    She reaches out for the only one she know...
    In reach of that man... the one that will never let go...
    As he comes up by her side...
    Stepping in her stride...

    She finds peace within...
    But when will it end..
    When you know he's a good man...
    Or when its time to let go...

    They say we fuss over the petting things...
    Constantly want change....
    But how's a woman to be happy...
    If you can't even do whats asked of thee...
    Maybe that would eliminate the complaining...
    Next him... then her... they both leave..

    Still walking that same road..
    Accepting imperfections yet looking for perfection...
    We often yearn for the protection...
    The affection.. of a Man...

    Nothing wrong with the need...
    Reason our father created Adam and Eve.
    Its all in a rotation of 360 degrees.
    It will be as it was once forseen...
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice and serious really enjoyed it for real
     
  3. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks.. I'm glad you liked it... I had writen it couple of months ago and homeboy of mines requested a read.. so i shared that one.. and he and was like this is hot so you know i had to re-read it for myself... and I thought it would be a good read.. especially if a family man liked:D... I felt i should share!!! thanks a bunch maddrapper... the appreciate is felt deeply...
     
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    touching flow

    we'll wise up

    peace

    pd
     
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