Black Poetry : Womb

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GwenDee, Nov 11, 2001.

  1. GwenDee

    GwenDee Member MEMBER

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    In this vacant place

    A womb of time

    Smell the thoughts of things

    Whisper fearful dreams

    Drifts of paradise

    Beating hope

    Alone with God



    GwenDee
    11-11-01
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GwenDee...

    You don't come often, but when you do..you bring soft candles and honey suckle incense...then your words float their fragrance...and we inhale the essence of your poetry

    this was beautiful Gwen..

    *scent-sational*

    :heart:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "in this vacant place..."

    stands
    soul next to soul
    of those
    who hold the light
    that leads the way.

    you are not alone.:)

    NICE FLOW.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I agree wit them !

    from the light is wisdom .....speaketh sistah!
    welcome back glad to read ya again!:heart: :kiss:
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your waters

    run deep, Ms. GwenDee.... I've read this piece several times and come away with the most beautifully scintillating imagery every time.... each time...different from the last.

    Thank you for this, but...

    ...why must you make us (me) wait so long between breaths?

    :heart:

    a
     
  6. GwenDee

    GwenDee Member MEMBER

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    Thank you

    Thank you for all your kind remarks

    GwenDee
     
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