Black Poetry : WOMAN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by L.P, May 29, 2004.

  1. L.P

    L.P Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whatever happened in the beginning of time.
    There's no doubt women learned to penetrate man's mind.
    Perceived as gift to man.
    Assumption which no longer stands.
    With understanding of (free will)simply meaning(by choice).
    Patienly women have controlled the situation with a silent voice.
    Focus and ability to take charge but not prepare to challenge strong resistence.
    But never or less without reproduction,being the main source of existence.
    In the position to upset the balance.
    But compassion gets in the way, so unable to handle.
    Persistence sometime by choice,but often forced, becoming independent.
    Women are slowly but surely taking the role of leaders,refusing to surrender.
    Man which was given the role,making all the decisions.
    Never giving thoughts,not even considering a woman's vision.
    With concerns to only satisfy their needs.
    Man has become too arrogant to see.
    That his backbone which held it all together.
    Is detecting visible signs of weakness with or without can do better.
    Becoming aware of the choice was always for them to make.
    Instead choosing love over power within their reach,declining to take.
    For so long convince or being convinced that their body the key.
    Women are now using their minds to break free.
    Within God's plan women can finally take a bow.
    Because God knows that they realize the plan,declining to take control,but surely know how.
    With that thought,it's time for men to give them love and respect,it's well over due.
    And by any chance there's a problem(remember)your(MOTHER)she gave birth to you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up on point and tyte flow
     
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    tight drop likes ya flow
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Your words may strike some nerves, but I for one, can see your point. Hope you're enjoying your stay at destees.
     
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    hmmmm
    some stirring topics here
    as women will not take over
    i get your points but it is time for Black men in particular to respect thier women as they should
    many men say they didn't grow up without a father and become the same as he
    and some men are arrogant because someone makes em that way
     
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    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    For me,without women,men would not be able to do many thinks and without men,women wouldn't shine like this!So,as black,we should show the fact that men and women are linked ... forever!I respect women!I'm full of gratitude for God b/c of His wonderful creature!They are so wise! :wink:
    Lloyd
     
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    profound, insightful and much need words...
    Great read!
     
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    very nice...i heard ya statements
    no doubt
    one love
    khasm
     
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