Black Poetry : WOMAN

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  1. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "WOMAN"


    WOMAN

    It's the true essence of your core that excites the real MAN within

    me, and allows me to explore your uniqueness at my own pace.

    WOMAN

    Your touch is UNIVERSAL in it's appeal and infinite in it's meaning.(I REALLY dig that about you)

    WOMAN

    You are friend, lover, sister, mother and YOU exsist as no OTHER ever could.
    You not only fill my heart, but you also fill my HEAD with a knowledge and determination that lets me know I could never let you down.
    (With your inspiration I shall never land)

    WOMAN

    You are my midnight rose that blooms at the stroke of 12...can you feel my darkness??

    It is IN this darkness I can be found seeking that which makes you GLOW.

    WOMAN

    To look into your eyes is to know certain PEACE that can only be achieved through a lifetime of searching....yet you make it happen in an instant....in a way that only YOU can.

    WOMAN

    I struggle to figure out this EPIPHANY and what it is about you that won't allow me to look away....it must be gravity....for if gravity is a force of nature, then you are a force to be reckoned on your own terms.

    When I see you, I see the true definition of beauty PERSONIFIED, and when I look at you it is with both admiration, respect and bold enjoyment. I've come to know both all too well where you are concerned.

    WOMAN

    You walk in graceful strides as if a SYMPHONY were being played with your every movement.(MAY I HAVE THIS DANCE?)
    You are many things to many people, but you are these things to me:WARM
    HONEST
    THOUGHTFUL
    INDEPENDENT
    INTELLIGENT
    HUMBLE
    STRONG
    BEAUTIFUL....(should I go on?)

    WOMAN

    I know the secret to understanding you.
    First, you should be looked at with the heart, because LOOKS can always be deceiving.

    I see the way you:

    COMFORT
    ENCOURAGE
    MOTIVATE
    ARTICULATE

    These are the things that can be felt and seen.(I FEEL YOU....I SEE YOU)

    WOMAN

    You have the kind of BEAUTY that doesn't fade with age or trends.
    I was desperately urgently trying to define why I'm so STRONGLY indebted and attracted to you.

    I've looked at you with my HEART....and I've looked at you with my EYES, and I finally understand why.

    It is because YOU ARE WOMAN!!!!( WOMB MAN)
    YOU ARE LIFE.

    And I'll be DAMNED if you're not the FINEST thing I've ever seen!!!!
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    {The word “Woman” } I do “Love” the way “You” say it!!!!
    I feel you…….I see you
    Mmmm, Mmmm, Mmmm:blush:


    Le garçon, vous m'avez reçu!
    :heart:Your Sage
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin this!
     
  4. Khasm13

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    this is tyte...
    ode to da strong woman...
    i can dig it
    peace
    khasm
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoa!

    feelin'it souldeep
    Coco :heart:
     
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    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sage....you are inspirational without breathing.
    Thanks for the love and encouragement....when I wanted to walk away, you said stay. lol

    Mrs Kenney....Thanks for just even reading my submissions.
    All God's blessings be upon your house.

    Khasm13....I've read your work and to have your prescence commenting on any of my work is almost the ultimate ultimate.
    Thank you.

    Coco....thanks for letting your soul soar while reading my work!!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Oracle..........no problem, my inspiration comes full circle
    I only wish to return the many gifts that have been so deeply
    given..........Your Sage

    Never look back, A poet cannot fail, it is a success to be one!:heart:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: wow.....damm....wow this was a piece that deserves the open mic...
     
  9. Justerika

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    wow, this makes me proud to be a woman, wish i had a man
    that could lay it down verbally like this...
     
  10. triniti424

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    Quinessential1...I had to bring this back it was LOVELY indeed :)
    fortunate woman is she to have thee :)
     
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