Black Poetry : Woman Untitled #2

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  1. Langston2000

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    she was like a breath of fresh air
    the color of night was the look of her hair
    she had the cosmos around her waist
    she was like female divinity firmly encased

    her lips were like candied yams, sweet to taste
    her walk was like a game of tag you had to give chase
    her mind was like a college professor who was one of those ex-panthers
    you could ask question after question and yet she was full of real answers

    the first time we made love it was verbal, talking about the movement and where we should go
    her eyes undressed me as I spoke of my love for Black Nationalism and before you know
    our words were caressing each other mentally while we sat upright
    we talked for a few hours well into the night
    she rode me mentally until she came with her own orgasms
    hours after that first conversation i had mental spasms

    i long to touch her with my hands but my mind is not done
    after all what would happen if you touched the sun?
     
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    :wave: :wave: Welcome Langston2000 :wave: :wave:

    Thank you for joining us and sharing your beautiful poetry.
    Please make yourself at home, because you truly are in the
    midst of loving friends and family. You're welcome to all that
    we have here, there's koolaid in the fridge and we even have
    oreos ... though some family members, not mentioning any
    names Bishop, likes to hide them from us. :)

    This peace is beautiful ... thank you.

    :heart:

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    WHOA!!! This piece is off the hook.
    Sweet... :) :star: :luv:
    Welcome, I looking foward to reading more
    :wave:
     
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    langston.


    i also have a deep fondness for those conversation
    kisses that leave you guessing about what an actual
    caress would be like... :)

    ...i enjoyed the read!! thank you for sharing...

    alwayspeace.

    elayne.
     
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