Black Poetry : Woman To Woman

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wifey:

    So, you're what he wanted
    Flaunted
    And Fronted
    Like he loved and wanted
    Baby, he didn't mean it
    What he really wanted was IT
    Don't be fooled becuz he will ALWAYS come back to me
    We have a child and see that house, WE rent it
    The car, he bought it
    The child, WE made it
    What do you have that can take me out the picture, S**T


    Other Woman:
    What do I have? No you didn't ask me that
    Did I hear right? Did you have the nerve to ask me that?
    Evidently, I had EVERYTHING that you didn't
    When you wasn't in the mood to please, he came to ME
    Lady can't you see
    It was nothing personal with me
    I just wanted to be held
    And your man was the one that made me melt
    He was the one that I felt, and I was the one he felt
    You talking about all this material stuff, well since you want to go there I can too
    See that plasma screen television, guess who bought it? It wasn't me
    That Louis Vitton,Yeah HE bought that for me
    And the new computer in the living room, who else could it be
    You want to talk money, well lady your man supplied that for me
    Evidently without your knowledge but whose fault is that, DON'T BLAME ME!!

    Wifey:
    Well, who else could I blame
    The lady standing before me playing games
    Yeah, you're the only one to blame
    Before you came into his life
    I was his woman, his wife
    And he was the man I wanted to spend the rest of my life
    We had a baby
    And he constantly mentioned he loved me
    And then mysteriously
    YOU, the other lady
    Came and took my baby
    You destroyed our happy home
    Made him CUM to you and leave me alone
    No contact, and never even a phone
    To contact him when he was at your home
    I must say, you really did a job with him
    But he's my man, and I can't and won't let you take him!!!

    Other Woman:
    Well, he wasn't your man when he brought me into your home
    Loved me down and made me cum
    He wasn't your man when he was up late nights whispering to me on the phone
    And he definitely wasn't your man them late nights when he didn't even bother to come home
    I didn't want to start anything with him at first
    Man, I tell ya this thing wasn't even rehearsed
    But suddenly, I feel as if I'm wrong
    I fell wrong for taking him from your home
    And waking him up late nights by alarm to tell him to go home
    Telling him to go home to his WIFE, and leave me alone
    All alone
    That takes courage especially when you don't want to be left alone
    Lady, I'm sorry I hurt you. I know I'm wrong
    I tried to at big and tall
    But I know I'm really the one to blame for it all

    Wife:
    You [email protected] right, you're wrong
    Did I ever do anything to you, huh?
    Did I ever take food from your family and money from your pockets, huh?
    Did I ever take a lover from you or be a burden?
    So, why would you want to me that to me, Sharon?
    You was my girl
    It wasn't like you was some nameless girl
    You SHARED my world
    You held me late nights when I felt like he had left my world
    You lied to me, do you have any morals?
    Man, just last week you told me about a man who was married
    And the baby that you now carried
    But I never dreamed that NAMELESS individual would be my man, the person I married.
    You told me about the loved you shared
    About his emotions for the baby and how much he cared
    But I can't believe you dared
    To take him from me, I thought I mattered

    Other Woman:
    Lady you do matter
    I wish I could make this better
    Erase all the past events and once again hang out like we were sisters
    But I'm afraid it will never again be the same
    For we fell for the same man's games
    Came off the same man's flame
    And now our friendship is up in flames
    Dang,
    Micheal said he loved me
    He said he wanted to marry me
    And he said that he would never leave me
    Lady, I never meant for this to happen
    But before I knew it I was accepting his semen
    And I was the OTHER WOMAN
    I'm sorry Lady, I really am but my fate was predestined
    (*Other Woman takes out gun*)
    I'm sorry lady but I drunk the poison
    The evil poison
    And commited treason
    I must leave and end my life now becuz of this reason
    Lady, please know I will always loved you
    Even as I burn in hell and sever for what I put you through
    We will forever be sisters
    (*BANG!*) (*Other Woman shoots herself in the head*)

    Wifey:
    (*Runs over to Other Woman*)
    No, get up Saron
    We gon' make it through this
    If this baby is his
    We'll just raise it with the rest and make the best of this
    Get up Sharon
    You were never a burden
    You were always my reason
    To survive
    And stay alive
    Get up!!!!
    (*Other Woman doesn't answer*)
    Get up girl, it's gonna get better

    The story fades..........
     
  2. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's sad to say that this story was actually true. Yes, it was true. It happened a few months ago in my old hood. Two true blue friends got caught screwing the same man. The scene that really played out though was way sadder and rated R than this but I revised what I really wrote. Anyway, the wifey in the story ended up leaving Micheal and she now stays with her mother where she is a dummy of herself. Well, not dummy but you know what I'm saying. She's just a skeleton of herself. She talks to herself and she's constantly crying. She's not even a mother for her children. Her mother is. I wrote this poem not only to broadcast drama in my hood but to paint the picture of what REAL friends are and who your enemies are. I guess the saying is true. "Keep your enemies close but your friends closer."
     
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    Oh MADD I have fake collisions so I make provisions

    Like headquarters for misled daughters that go on missions

    For sex met a girl with a wet world like mine the type fine

    Booty round and brown like a basketball, boys out their mind

    Drastic call for sex, they want desserts under her skirt

    Because she wonder flirt butt when she strut so boys be so alert

    When she walks by, one day in fun way she came to my home

    The game was on started talking about the way boys do

    Didn’t know she toys too, oh MADD she jest kissed my lips true

    Couldn’t do anything I was so surprise another girl kiss like that

    It was woman to woman oh she jest rub my thighs so phat

    Oh that felt good oh she just got my tongue now she hold my hand

    With a bold plan oh she jest put he hands under my skirt

    So many coo-chee hairs in juicy pairs she pushed to the side to work

    Her finger in my



    OK THAT’S ENOUGH
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a sad tale spin to life , i felt all this here sis.
     
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    Whoa, that's heavy - specially knowin it's true. You really have a way of bringin things to life, girl. Mad mad respect for this one.
     
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    truth is sometimes mo scarier than fiction....
    nice drop poet....
    one love
    khasm
     
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    Wow...this was so raw and to find that it was real...and so tragic
    This was a brave poem
    thanks for sharing
    this definitely took me on a journey...

    Sage
     
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    saga

    I'm sorry that this is a true story but this is an everyday occurance for us women and it's a shame that the man always appears to win.
     
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    No winner in this sad and awful tale, however, the writer stole the show!
     
  10. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much family. Yes, it is very sad that this was true. I just wished that it wasn't. I'm glad that ya'll liked my scribe though. Much love family. :thanks:
     
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