Black Poetry : Woman I am

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Jan 30, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Woman and I
    Listen to my soul
    As it speaks to you…

    Blood of your blood
    Air of your air……
    Water of your water
    Match of your rib
    I am this woman
    Learnin as I go…
    A taste of one of a kind…..
    no other as I
    Wonder of amazement
    Pieces of a dream
    Reachin in and growin
    See I am this woman
    who loves the way she
    Talk
    Feel
    Look
    Act
    Love and
    Cherish…..
    See I am this woman
    Woman am I

    Love from
    ova da rainbow
    and thru the orbs
    reaching out
    as I hit the starz
    as my soul cried
    for the love
    it longs for…..
    I am this woman….
    From baby girl
    To girl
    To this woman
    That yearns inside
    And tryin to understand
    How much I have grown
    See…..
    I been hurt
    torn down
    Used
    abused
    Lost…and….
    I get back up
    to stay in this race…
    At my pace…..
    Something inside of me
    Makes me believe in me….
    I am this woman
    That fights
    battles and storms
    And come out
    A little stronger
    each time…..
    I am this woman
    Woman I am…….

    I am who I am to be…
    Don’t be afraid…
    Don’t even be jealous
    Listen to my soul
    As it speaks to you…
    For my love grows
    stronger each day
    for I am this girl
    who is now
    this woman……
    more woman
    then I thought
    I could ever be….
    I am this woman
    Woman I am


    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
    copyright 2004
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    the woman who you be
    is very interesting...
    loved this joint
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let that "woman" within emerge...
    it's a beautiful thing...indeed
    nice flow sister!
     
  4. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very, very nice...
    some fall and don't rise..
    thanks for those words...
    you're a blessing in disguise.
    keep rising...and rising...and rising
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done
    the true woman u are
    lovin dis drop here flow head on
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This scribe was full of pride, very well posed.
     
  7. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, you are woman......especially after a beautiful poem like that....that was tyte......skillz truly went to work on this one......it was a true masterpiece
     
  8. kenyatta

    kenyatta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And just think, you're not half the woman you're gonna be !!! Shine on, I loved your work !
     
  9. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Please believe...
    every word I read...
    I feel and I see...

    Woman!!

    Thank you for sharing
     
  10. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fam for the love
    and support
    peace and love
    angel
     
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