Black Poetry : WOMAN (becoming to know her name)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by EXpressurself, Nov 11, 2003.

  1. EXpressurself

    EXpressurself Active Member MEMBER

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    Your love tortures my soul
    your love has me under control
    but I'm tired of loving you
    tired of losing my soul
    tired of being under control
    of man

    I am beginning to understand
    there is a better plan
    for my life
    without man
    without lies
    without pain
    without shame
    without your ruthless game

    I am beginning to know myself
    getting to know my real name
    WOMAN
    who brings truth not lies
    who brings joy not pain
    who brings honor not shame
    no connections to a ruthless game
    but a woman
    becoming to know her name
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome again..nice drop:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice piece with great wits
    flow on
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    g'on and tell it!

    nice write & btw...
    :wave: welcome to Destee's

    feelin'it souldeep!
    Coco :heart:
     
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    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :rolling: nice piece welcome to Destee :bowdown:
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    good piece,
    heard it--felt it too.
    keep it coming,
    until eternity meets you..........
     
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    wow
    welcome:wave: to the family
    this is a wonderful flow
    please do flow more
    wonderful
    Peace
     
  8. EXpressurself

    EXpressurself Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you to everyone for your love :kiss:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    A woman become to know her beings
    she pass all greed to lay da deed
    this was very lovely done .....most welcome
     
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    Welcome :wave:
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    i hope you continue to express as much of your spirit as you can :)
     
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