Black Poetry : Without You

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  1. PoeticThoughts

    PoeticThoughts Member MEMBER

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    Without you I'd be all alone
    I'd be so confused I just
    wouldn't know what to do.

    You are what keeps me alive,
    without you I couldn't survive.
    You are my air you make me
    breathe.

    You are my sight because you help
    me see, you help me see that without
    you there is no me.

    You are what keeps me strong,
    you help me forget everything
    that is going wrong.

    I know I caused you
    hurt and pain, and I cant
    believe you are still by my
    side.

    I used to wonder why, but now
    I just am thankful for you staying
    by. Please stay with me and
    never leave because without
    you I honestly cant breathe...


    arial
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HIYA Poetic Thoughts :)

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    looks like whoeva it is...they gots ya hooked :)
     
  3. JayL0v3

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    FOR EVERY LOVE U LOST
    THE LESS U CRY
    U GET USE TO THE ROUTINE
    SO U FIGURE WHY TRY
    U GET CAUGHT UP IN PAIN
    THAT YOUR MIND REWINDS THE MEMORIES
    THAT YOUR HEART WONT LET U ERASE
    TIME WONT HEAL IT
    NOTHING CAN
    AND THERE U ARE
    ALONE AND FRUSTRATED AGAIN

    - -I BEEN THRU 2 MUCH - -
    KEEP DOING YA THING MAMA . .. 1LUV
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & bond
    welcome from above as i bless u so love
    this was awesome i feel it within
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  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful and so honest. I loved it. Much love.
     
  6. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoever you wrote this for, must be a beautiful person. nice flow and welcome to destee...
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
     
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