Black Poetry : without you

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skrybe7, Jul 27, 2003.

  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it ain't right witout you
    and all my thoughts about you
    come from a love I know
    and you know
    my love for you
    is something that I can't undo
    and you grow
    and I grow
    we so seem to be destiny
    if only I could express
    the whole of my emotions
    but words fail me
    time and time again
    without you
    I've come undone
    soul bound we so seem
    there's nothing left to dream
    here without you
    how can I doubt you
    and your special someone
    have moved on
    and still I see what I've become
    without you
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wjoa :) this was so tyte for real skybe. I always love reading your posts. Im always in for a treat:) :D
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Doing without huh brother man? Well love can't wait to have you back in its clutches, take heart. Feelin' the emotion though- peace
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is a beautiful heart-filled piece. I second SwtT on the part about I'm always in for a good read. Much love and blessings.:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u drop another hot scribe on us
    dis was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte, tyte... i know the feelin...
     
  7. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man, that was deep and tyte. Flow on.
     
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    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awww skrybe baby i can relate....
    this peace had me breathless....

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
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