Black Poetry : Without You

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  1. onelove1soul

    onelove1soul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who am I…
    A void, an empty space
    An unsettled spirit
    A woman lacking definition…
    Without You.

    Who was I…
    A seedling searching for nurture
    A child wondering all alone
    Everyone else’s expectations…
    Without You.

    And then came You…
    Beautiful wonderful You
    The You that allows me to be Me
    The You that intensifies my creativity.
    You are the missing link
    You provide the seedling with a cool drink…

    Of Love…

    Love like none unknown
    Love that I can truly call my own.

    You make Me wanna…

    Love.

    And then love some more…
    And more…
    And more.

    You make Me wanna…

    Take care of You in all ways.
    To be the one that You’ve only imagined.
    The one You read about in romantic fiction.
    The one to satisfy all of Your aggressions.

    And from now till eternity I will be…
    Your Woman
    Your Wife
    Your Lover
    Your Shamwari.

    And none of these wonderful things are possible for Me…

    Without YOU.
     
  2. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwww :) this is soo good and its so sweet:) Tyte flow poet

    Welcome to Destees
    :wave:
     
  3. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummm..love can be such a wonderful thing, beautiful flow,
    and welcome to destee,

    one love,
    -story
     
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    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And YOU killed em with this one. This was off the chain! I know exactly what this is like. Great read!

    WELCOME TO DESTEE'S FAMILY!!!:wave::wave:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet flow
    ya heart is loveth of thee
    so truely ......tyte scribe welcome to the flowz of
    destee.com and the poetic family
     
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    Rico Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was beautiful. Very lovely.
     
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    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    what a heartwrenching expression of love! Beautiful!
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very sweet and lovely...
     
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