Black Poetry : Without Her

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Mar 28, 2006.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why do i have to make it alone?

    when so many other guys get to talk to sweet girls on their Cingular cell phones

    the harder i try to show girls a friendly tone

    the more they think i want to jump their bones

    that's true to a certain extent

    but the girls i really like can keep me content

    with a friendly disposition

    or by taking an apposing position

    in a friendly debate

    how come when i try to conversate

    girls are so quick to tell me i'm not their soulmate?

    the more i try, the harder it is to collate

    all the bad feelings

    caused by me constantly appealing

    to a female prettier than any montage i've ever seen on any ceiling

    i guess i should give up on stealing

    her heart

    but if i ever understand why other guys get to collect her art

    without even trying hard

    i promise i'll go out and cut every yard

    in Knoxville for free

    before i head out to the Mediteranean Sea

    and disappear



    love,

    howard
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Howard this off the hook. I will have to come back to comment more, but I say you have something great and enlighting flowing here. Great drop.:welldone:
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was tight. I really like the style and flo of this peace cuz.
     
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    A soul mate you will find in the desinted time
    never give up on love...


    Nice Drop.:welldone:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was tyte
    and the search for that one
    the love u sought is near...
     
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    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Howardtsu,

    You are truly one deep Brotha. Keep them flows movin......our hearts:)
     
  7. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u have such deep feelinz, i mean its tight how u put yo feelinz in rhymes, boi u kno u got skillz 4 writtin emotionz, so flo on wit nonstop
    and i was feelin it

    blackluv and bp
     
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