Black Poetry : Without a trace...........(to be continued)

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  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Without a trace



    head still spinning from rum & coke
    sheets messy & soaked from lusts night stroke
    Wham bam
    man o man
    was this her plan
    hit me off right then bounce like a man?

    come to think about it..dam
    she pushed up on me
    told me her name was sam
    Well Samantha Greedy

    She had me wraped
    because I never caught that
    last name of her rap
    bacause baby was Phat
    let's drink to that.

    We did the slow jams
    clutched bodies
    held hands
    then I showed her my version of the forbiden dance

    la la la la bamba...
    shake your thing momma
    your body brings mad drama
    along with your mental persona

    we sat at the bar
    talked sh*t
    smoked sigars
    she smiled I grinned
    then we walked to our cars.


    Night was young
    so I followed my rule of thumb
    never leave a job undone
    and believe me she was worth doing son

    She stroked my gotee with her finger
    crooned in my ear like singer
    Now I knew I had to bring her
    to hits notes in soprano
    as I playes with her body like stevie on a piano.

    We diped to my loft
    body soft
    clothes toss
    in a trail from the door to the bed
    nuff said
    like right said fred
    I'm too sexy for my bed

    So we stoped
    droped
    and rolled
    :rolling:
    testing the limits of each others desires
    she was the wood to my fire
    lust to my desire
    she made me grow like ponicho....
    so call me Liar Liar Liar

    who gave her thew codes to my freaky flows
    baby performed like she was bootie poppin on the dance floo
    on a hand stand she took my afroamerican bandstand


    To Be continued........ :peace:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was...uh...very steamy. Will she be back for some mo? Guess we'll find out in part 2.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    madd heat here tyte steamy flow bruh
    pt.2 please
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

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    ok din
    this was peppery
    spice..flow on
    pt2.....waiting............. :coffee:
     
  5. Sweet baby_face

    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Where's part 2?
    I got my popcorn and......
    Waiting ever-so patiently 4 pt.2
    I'm feelin' this.
     
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    nice one
    hi ..Part 2 please
    nice one brother
    waiting for what happen
    more more more:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    tyte joint....
    names remembered in da nightlife....word
    one love
    khasm
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :read: Keep reading she is in deen in store 4 a treat! :laugh:

     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :read: Yes My brother on it's way just 4 u all...let the steam fly :lips:

     
  10. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes peppery indeed I like my meat seasoned. :shades:

     
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