Black Poetry : within untitled

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lost in a big world
    Feeling lonely
    Hurting of all the cares
    A bitter taste
    Search the being….
    As the innocence
    Was wipe a way
    In a blink of the eye

    Earth taken her
    last breath
    A love was lost
    And felt to touch…..
    Searchin inside
    The wind
    Hoping
    Yearning….
    One day

    But…….
    ……lost in the cross fire
    love let go

    As….
    Love walk in the light
    Scared of what was
    She ran…..
    But love held on
    Not giving up
    But gave comfort
    And understanding

    back searchin
    wonder why….
    For the taste
    Became….
    Sweet the air
    Was lighter
    The stars
    The moon
    What a sight
    As the world turn
    And the joy
    Took over…
    As love had shown
    anew

    Mind twisted
    Longing for that
    Once more…..
    She folds
    and hide..
    again

    A blkangel thang...2004
     
  2. mistaliberator

    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what can i say about angel

    its a ramble but if you listen it talks and it moves so agel just think
    all of the things that you are not sure about you have the answers to so peace and keep writing i love to read
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well thanks glad y likes to read me
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such an emotive piece, you'd have to be stone not to feel it. Heartfelt scribe.
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mba

    Very nice piece
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks yall fo da support
     
  7. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i felt like i was on some kind of journey in this piece
    cool

    one
    /antar
     
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