Black Poetry : Within the depths of time…until i figure out a name...

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your lips touch my lips as we
    fold inside our walls of our world….
    Floatin on air….

    Burning desire set fire to my soul.
    As you move me across
    the skies with one kiss…
    a bliss exchanged
    as we uncover something so rare…..
    washed away the fear…
    as love moved in…..
    touch my being from my mental
    releasing me into a world
    I never thought….
    My love flows all the
    time and theres no way but to
    Let love have its way…
    Within the depths of time…
    As we interlace in loves call
    My heart is open…
    Fires buring……..yearning
    inside
    as your name is on
    My lips…
    as I taste your sweet love
    emabrace me and bring me home…..
    that’s where I want to be……
    thru the winds of time...
    it puts me on high......
    i wont fight it...babe i cant.......
    for i am finally in love....
    and i cant believe it....
    all these emotions
    feels so good inside of me.....
    what do i do????
    but love you more and more
    as times go by as day past...
    and night comes
    the minutes on
    the clock dont mean a thing.........
    loves silence have came across me...
    with pride and honor.....
    the beginning of a beautifully story
    yet untold....as love makes its call....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was tyte sound like a lip lockin
    hot flow a unsong celebration

    the name u already know it fit so well
    i like da scribing here ...wow
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    then i will keep thy name given....thank you for your support
    much love to you and HAPPY HOLIDAYS......Angel
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Let love have its way…

    :luvv:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks Hodee for da read and support....:angel1:
     
  6. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :flirt: You go angel This piece is a slam...(grand that is)
     
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    Beautifully posed.
     
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    how bout, the magic of your kiss? cause this piece is magic, girl
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    caramelpython watzinaname gempis.....
    thank you for the love and support on dis..
    much love to each of you.....Angel
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh this was very nice..i like how you flow this off sis..
    nice one
    Peace
     
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