Black Poetry : within da vow....from da heart....

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Do you know I write to you
    I write of you…
    For my mind often
    flows of only you
    in thoughts of what is
    and what will be…
    as my dream comes
    reality…
    inside of you inside of me…
    the love that travels….
    makes it all worth the while..
    as I write for you know….
    Feel me..hear my words….
    Know I am real……
    For this is your poem….
    Forever more……

    As I look to the north..from a star…
    Above high….my love flow to you….
    As the wind begins to blow..i feel your touch…
    As you embrace me in a thought….
    Of a dream made reality….
    I stand by your side…
    as you hold my hand…
    As I sit upon a star afar…
    The strength is u an I
    With in da winds of ….

    I don’t think you hear my vow
    As I place it in the wind to you………..
    My oath will never be broken….
    I speak in respect and honor as you
    Take my hand…
    You’re my rare love of a life time…
    My essence is made from you…..
    As we reach our paradise…inside a dream…
    That we built…from above I came to you…

    Forth I am thy rib…bleed of ur blood..
    And breath of ur air….we are
    fire
    water
    air
    together…
    with in da kingdom we will make
    as I cherish your love….
    Feel my heart…
    Hear my words….
    And know I am real…..

    my tears caresses my face..
    As I say in my words at my pace….
    We only scratched thy surface…
    Of what can be great as two not one..
    But two becomin one…..
    Hear me when I say
    I love you….
    Understand as I speak with you…
    I wipe my past..to
    embrace my future with you
    forever more.....

    a blkangel thang......
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow...that was simply beautiful...very touching indeed.
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for da love watz....Angel
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was absolutely Heavenly!

    What else could I expect from our Angel...but a heavenly message
    filled with love and longing and promise...I love this piece/peace!

    Blessings On Your House!
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    msluciousb thank you i am so glad you enjoyed
    much love to you..Peace..Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well done this was sweet scribing poetess
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Very Beautiful

    You write so beautifully...keep it coming.

    :toast: :D
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aww thank you my brother....
    love and support means alot...
    much love to you..Angel
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you Monetary...glad ya likes the read..
    much love to you :thanks: Angel
     
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