Black Poetry : With This Pen...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Apr 20, 2002.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With this pen I thee scribe
    my love proposal that surely shall
    remain a part of your heart
    forever and one day
    whenever you read me
    lovingly,
    inside and out

    I will cherish you more than life
    itself; for life has no meaning
    if you, whom I love so deeply,
    cannot share in this heavenly
    joy which is my destiny for you;
    as I am a romantic poet so in love

    I am beholden unto you in
    infinite ways because I want
    you to know that the
    sweet nectar of my pen
    has no boundaries, comes to no
    conclusions, and surely never ends

    As I walk to the chantry with you
    in poetic pomp and circumstance,
    I commit to you with my words;
    which are the ties that bind
    and consummates my sacrament
    in scribe

    I, the love poet,
    deeply vibe in written and spoken form
    so my heart can be heard through
    words that portray my inner feelings
    that seek to caress your
    soul to accept my own in return

    So today,
    with this pen I thee scribe
    to ask for your mental hand in poetry
    because I am in love with you and
    sincerely honored to join our
    like minds in matrimony
    poetically...

    ©GQINC2K2

     
  2. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...>floats in>

    Now this is romance born on the wings of eagles that dare to soar beyond what the world sees or wants them to be in order to become what they themselves want and are destined to be.

    GQ, my brother, this is music, lovely and free, a melody that seeks to be heard above the den of lust-filled shouts and screams. I really enjoyed reading this my friend.
    someone once told me without romance there would be no love but I say without love there would be no romance because love inspires romance. But when I think about it I guess they inspire each other.

    <floats out<...
     
  3. eternal

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    I am not astonished, but this was beautiful...
    ahhhh...{exhaling}
    I am in love with your scribe!
    Eternal
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see??? ...there you go!! always startin' sumthin'! :D

    this is very very VERY nice & sweet-ly done.
    (just like always)

    :heart:
    MEB.
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    You, the love poet

    i'm feeling

    peace as always

    dssNYC
     
  6. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the read poets!!!

    :peace:/:heart:
    GQ
     
  7. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ

    You worked a hell of a
    3some here.
    Outstanding flow

    Scribeaboutit!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  8. j'hiah

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    a.w.e.s.o.m.e :toast:

    man this was the shizznit!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wit that pen u have posed a masterful scribe
    of pure love & devine soulful bliss.......tyght flow bru!
     
  10. poeticdelight

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    *swooning*

    this was nice :D

    pd