Quiet Poetry Lounge : WITH THE RAIN COMES EMOTIONS

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  1. PurpleMoons

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    With the rain comes emotions
    reminisces of enchanting dreams
    goals tainted with the scent of unfinished business
    the cries of lonely mothers; the dances of absent fathers
    forbidden fruit carved and carelessly placed inside a broken ceramic bowls

    With the rain comes a kaleidoscope of emotions
    like music... weaving and intertwining; meeting at that perfect keynote
    a tsunami of past events whizzing by like an informational highway
    an emotional roller-coaster of failed promises, regretful moments, and wishful do-overs

    With the rain comes emotions
    tugging at the cloak of undisclosed secrets created at unprepared moments
    retuning of the hearts vibration of once upon a time experiences
    forget-me-nots that were intentionally left to be forgotten

    With the rain comes the memories of life
    Little jolts of electricity cleverly designed to inspire compassion and appreciation
    imagine two fingers slowly rubbing together (specifically the thumb and the index)
    Congratulations! you have just been introduce to the tiniest violin player ever
    Now you can understand the acid tear stains of another
    the pressure one feels around their heart when its broken or incredibly happy
    as if two hands wrapped tiqhtly and secured, smothering your sense of smell, touch,
    and reality.... Reminding you that you are alive!
    and no matter how hard you try to hide from lifes little treasures in disguise
    With the rain comes emotions
    Emotions designed to make you appreciate being alive!
     
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    Simply Beautiful...thank you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    loved it yesssssssssss!!!!
     
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    Outstanding!!!!
     
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    and so much emotions you have rained down on us, poetess.

    the river floweth
     
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    TY :D

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    TY Brother Rich!


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    TY Sister!

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    TY Baller!

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    " With the rain comes emotions
    tugging at the cloak of undisclosed secrets created at unprepared moments
    retuning of the hearts vibration of once upon a time experiences
    forget-me-nots that were intentionally left to be forgotten"

    Tell it like it t'was, PurpleMoons.
     
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