Black Poetry : WITH OPEN HAND

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  1. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see you
    standing
    just over
    the hill.

    In the palm
    of your hand,
    you hold
    my strength
    and my will.

    You begin
    to descend
    as I reach
    for the fate
    of my destiny.

    You motion
    for me
    to hurry,
    but I am
    not certain
    I can keep
    up with you.

    I step toward
    you as you
    disappear
    over the
    ridge.

    I stop
    and peer
    down
    over the
    edge.

    And there
    you are
    waiting
    under the
    bridge.

    You're reaching
    out to me,
    with open hand,
    offering me
    the whole of
    who I am.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'yes he whom hold the world in his handz
    give you who u be .......it's grand to feel da power
     
  3. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Rich, :wave:

    It is a divine feeling of freedom one senses when power generates through one's soul!!

    :thanks: for the read!!

    My best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    You begin
    to descend
    as I reach
    for the fate
    of my destiny....You're reaching
    out to me,
    with open hand,
    offering me
    the whole of
    who I am.

    so much beauty and peace in such a beautiful piece...heres to our destiny and to the one who offers it....:bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keeping your eyes on the open hand, each step you take represents, growth of who your are and once you reach his hand...you are complete.
     
  6. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    take a step
    into the unknown
    and find your home....


    very good work!:toast:
     
  7. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte flow!... you really painted a picture for me... about one's destiny... i luv this message :).... keep on flowing!

    peace
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is great, the vision is clear...Wonderful
    Peace
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    one word:beautiful :)
     
  10. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi cypher, :)

    What beautiful thoughts! You have given me much inspiration.

    Thanks for writing!!

    My best to you!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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