Black Poetry : With One Call

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dee, Mar 27, 2003.

  1. Dee

    Dee Active Member MEMBER

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    I was crushed when you left
    I cried myself to sleep every night
    but I was beginning to smile again
    I knew everything would be alright
    I mean it had been a month
    I couldn’t be depressed forever
    The sun always comes out again
    even after the stormiest weather
    Then with one phone call
    you took all that away
    You were thinking about me, needing me, missing me
    Hoping that I was okay
    Man there was a time when thats all I needed you to say
    Once again the tears started to flow
    And they still haven’t quite went away
    but that something that you’ll never know
    I hung up--you’ll never hear me cry
    So now you tell me how it feels
    to not even get a goodbye!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    shoe on da other foot !
    weep not 4 da myth of memories behind
    look ahead to da new sunshine

    silent goodbye's bring sweet hello's
    emotional feelings yet to know
    but i feel it deep in ya flow
    Dee Dee
    da shoe on da other foot
    he who laugh first cry last
    his tyme done pass
    rainy day be no more
    sweet sunshine of love
    is all in stor 4 u
    in due tyme ya smile will be
    long and pure do what u have to do
    new love awaits u !

    let it all out and keep flowin' i feel ya !
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this piece,
    that you wrote down.
    it speaks no words,
    because of the deep thought sound.
    keep on flowin,
    never let it die.
    for the sun will always shine again,
    in your dark gray sky..............(crunk--keep on)
     
  4. Dee

    Dee Active Member MEMBER

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    You both are so talented, thanks for the continued support!
     
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    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay Dee!! I would be telling a big ole lie if I said I ain't been there. Dang u left his a** in the gutter, now his silly a** knows how it feels. Thanks for the revenge, you do it for all of your species.
     
  6. Dee

    Dee Active Member MEMBER

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    :laugh:LMAO :laugh:
    Dream, Honestly it felt soooo good to hang up on him and to have him call me back to back to back. To hear him beg me not to hang up again.:laugh:
    Cheers to all my sistas that got the last laugh!:toast:
     
  7. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really respect that kind of strenght in a woman
    I guess you did what you had to
    life is full of chioces
     
  8. Dee

    Dee Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you! You are so right we all have choices, and I didn't choose to hang up on him to hurt him, I did it so I would no longer hurt me. I'm not going to lie though after it was all said and done it did feel good to have the upper hand!
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in all honesty I have to admit that the only women in my past that I really remember or respect were the ones that loved me but had the strenght and wisdom to let me go.
     
  10. Dee

    Dee Active Member MEMBER

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    Although I loved him and still do til this very day, I love me so much more! I'm a queen and I deserve to be treated as such, so I had no choice but to let him go. So, did u love any of these women back?
     
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