Black Poetry : with my head in the clouds...

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  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With my head in the…clouds
    You are my earth
    {You keep me grounded}

    My universe shines brightly
    Before me

    You brighten my day
    {with your smile}

    The twin rivers
    That are your eyes
    Beckons me

    Tears of joy
    Nourish the flowers
    …bringing forth blooms
    Of many colors
    Uttering silent happiness
    At their being

    I see the worth of my world {in you}

    With my head in…the clouds
    You are my earth

    In your laughter
    Are gentle rivers
    Flowing emotional blessings
    Lessening the heartache of
    Stressing over yesterday’s
    Sorrow
    That tomorrow might bring joy
    To the giver
    Of the river
    Of life.

    With my head…in the clouds
    You are my Universe.

    You allow me to soar.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    soar even though ya ground level
    ya head up in da clouds
    and emotions free
    love the way u scribe dis brutha Baller
     
  3. amberly

    amberly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is very nice... filled with so much love, Im feeling that


    am
     
  4. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this. Thank God for that which inspires us.
     
  5. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    baller

    your work has to get published some day

    you are so talented brother

    keep writing

    peace

    poeticd :)
     
  6. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and imma be the first one in line to get ma autographed copy.....




    One
     
  7. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and i'll be right in line behind UbZo tryna get the hook up too!
    nice flow.
     
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    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Touching piece.
     
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    Baller...

    Thank you.......my inspiration is nourished. :toast:

    Epiphany :heart:
     
  10. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there is love in the house. i am blessed to be among the givers and receivers of such wonderful gifts. THANK YOU.
     
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