Black Poetry : with me

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  1. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as I sit beneath the nimbus
    of a moon waxing
    where fluffs of clouds
    race by in the expanse
    of a tropical evening sky
    feeling the cool carress
    of subdued tradwinds
    against my face and bared feet
    it seems you should be
    with me
    counting stars emerge from
    the growing darkness
    of a soft heaven
    watching palm trees
    sway slow as they
    reach up to forever
    seems you should be
    right here where I could
    reach out and brush my
    fingers against your face
    where I could graze my lips
    against the softness of
    your neck
    searching out choice
    places to plant kisses
    where I wouldn't have
    cause to miss you
    or wish you were here
    with me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was a beautiful perfect picture painted
    it's a mesmerizer
    tyte scribe bruh !
     
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    poetic wordz..............
     
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    Whoa, the beauty of this blows me away. Nice!
     
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    dis is a lovely picture
    peace
    khasm
     
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    **FEEL ME**

    My heart misses you tenderly
    I'm overjoyed you feel the same
    I wish you were within my grasp...

    Seems like you're here though
    I can feel you beside me;all over me
    like warm baby oil dripping all over my body
    And the truth is with us distance hasn't weakened love
    but it strengthens deep within the
    innermost part of our hearts
    where it remains sacred and appreciated
    your soul intertwined with mine is what I cherish..... Eternally!!!

    ***just wanted to add to this lovely portrait you painted..
    well done ***
    (I'll be checking 4 ya...)
     
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    dang, that was beautiful,loved this
     
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    Nice metaphors. Very Tight!
    Makes me reflect on who I miss.