Black Poetry : With Love

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  1. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    With love.
    for love,
    by LOVE,
    We were made from mother earth
    to love each other in paradise
    as soulmates from our birth

    With love,
    by LOVE,
    to love,
    One another, hand in hand
    Sent to me from up above
    our love spreads throughout the land

    Too love,
    we love,
    true love,
    endlessly, forever more
    whether intertwined as one
    or apart on distant shore

    With love,
    by LOVE,
    my love,
    has no bounds to hold for thee
    as I come to quench my thirst
    with a love for you, from me


    by kemetstry
     
  2. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kemetstry:
    I love the way this piece
    is filled with so much LOVE
    Very Beautiful write!!!



    Much Luv
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really liked your usage of the word love throughout this piece. Love makes the possibilities glorious.
     
  4. Phenomenon

    Phenomenon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This write was so pure. It had the soul and deep simplicity of Lauryn Hill (a great mind that I will always idolize) Your words of love sang to me, i just wish the nation could hear it and digest it
     
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    There's A lot of love in this. Hopefully we can say the same for the world one day! So Here's Much Love for a Lovely Joint!
     
  6. PurpleMoons

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    You are an awesome poet Brother Kemetstry!

    I love the way you defined each stanza of
    what it meant to love.

    :qqb019:*double take* Kemetstry, is that really you?

    :heart:
     
  7. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    KEM!

    i see you playa

    what amazed me

    no cussin'

    lol:haha:

    your piece was filled with love man

    you could feel it

    well written man
     
  8. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Thanx










     
  9. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Awe Quit Hatin



    :11900::em0100::angel1::band::SuN004::lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

    Yes, it's me. I told you have have not problems with women, it's those others yall choose to defend










     
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    Kemetstry ... this is so nice ... so nice to see this sweet wonderful side of you ... :love:

    I'm looking for more ... :)

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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