Black Poetry : With In limits

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  1. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    With In limits

    Even with a social issue couldn’t form a local Militia?
    And bombard the street or be retard and weak like tissue
    I’d be a kleenex with no mean text let me wipe my nose
    Even though my script has different perspectives in prose
    It must be magnificent and effective like a red rose
    So pick this flower while I kick the power and bulldoze
    Buildings while chilling and filling brain with a water hose
    Slauhter those who oppose, if slop false misled chop off head
    Like a guillotine, so type sixteen bars and if you listen close
    While twisting posts with vocab you could be glistening most
    Of the time like a car shined with Turtle Wax, eat this toast
    It’s bread for your head and wealth for your health and growth
    In my life made a significant change drive a different Range
    With twenties and Sprewells and the chrome shine strange
    Thinking critical but stinking political in my background
    See I use to be a whack clown but now put the smack down
    Track down flavor like a bloodhound I’m thug renown
    At a club in town now famous and scrubs can’t bound
    Me you see? Look society bashes a variety of classes
    When you cash a check that bounce, the privacy bashes
    Your reputation and causes separation from good credit
    If your bankbook is blank and shook then it’s pathetic
    To pretend the monies are there, dummies are everywhere
    I could write a dialogue to help fight this clogged system of dare
    Analyze the issue and be wise in this militia be strapped
    With a plan in hand, keep in mind the streets are crime crap
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHOA!

    this was tyte.............waiting for more........
     
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    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling da flow, keep doing ya thang.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop...
    enjoyed the read
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    woooooooooooweeeeeeeeeeeeee! MADD
    ya flava get sweeter every drop ...tyteeeeeeeee
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS TO EVERYONE FOR THE RESPONSES FOR REAL YALL
     
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